|Reviews for Not So Smart|
| froggycait1102 1/31/11 . chapter 6
i like this story.
| Ace5492 12/18/10 . chapter 6
| tofuskin21 11/16/10 . chapter 4
HA. point for Justin.
well, another point to Alex for forgiving him.
POINT TO MAX FOR BEING WHO HE IS.
What am i counting for anyway? Forget it.
nice job revealing that stuff and handling all the emotions :)
Kind of confusing where it changed from first person to third person and back though.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| tofuskin21 11/16/10 . chapter 3
It's awesome that it's longer, i totally noticed and it's awesome that i get to have more to read! it's really realistic too.
PSBTW: you totally captured my favorite character Max's undescribable randomness!
| tofuskin21 11/16/10 . chapter 2
ooh! tortilla VS sandwich wrap controversy! jk, your story is really well written!
| tofuskin21 11/16/10 . chapter 1
OHMAGAD! cool plot! that is SO UNEXPECTED!
| mizsmilie10 11/10/10 . chapter 4
cool story. very unique idea..i like it. i also like how u clearly know the details like the smarty pants etc. Also, i think you really did a good job with Harper. everything she said was like exactly what she really would say. The only things that i might suggest is that i don't think Alex would cry over that, she'd probably just use it against him. And, not being mean or anything i'm just curious, after all of these years why is the guilt finally growing on Justin. But other than that very cool story, good idea!(:
| incywincyspider 11/1/10 . chapter 4
Hey this is interesting. Can't wait to see what Justin does to fix it.
| HatexLovexo 10/27/10 . chapter 2
really awesome story )
i always knew justin was hiding something P
keep up the great work cause i want more chapters )
| incywincyspider 10/24/10 . chapter 1
OMG Okay well I accidently pasted my review reply into the review box I had open so ignore that. I guess I'm 'not so smart' either. Cringe I must pay attention to what I do. But I literally have to spell check everything I write so copy it into word then past it back.
Okay well on to my review yay. This is funny I really like the emergency sandwich convention it made me laugh. Really good job for a first fanfic(not that it isn't a good story first fic or not). But anyway it was really good keep writing(my attempt at being supportive/inspirational. Well I think I have written enough(or too much really). Have a nice day.
| incywincyspider 10/24/10 . chapter 2
Hi thank you so much. I am really glad you like it. Anyway just finished writing chapter 14 so I'm going to put it up soon.