Hey, just came across this story while idly browsing through KOTOR fanfiction - its great! The idea of Atton time-travel is awesome. Mixing the Jedi Temple and Atton and Sion - oh the possibilities for fun are endless - imagine Sion and Sidious allying or fighting each other. Your characterisation of Atton is spot-on(he was always my favourite character). His fight on the roof-tops was brilliant and funny! and so Atton.

It is such a pity that this story will probably never be updated... I would so love to find out what happens next.. sniff.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't give up on this story! It looks like it could be amazing when it's finished! Go muse-hunting as soon as possible, 'cause another cancelled story is not what this site needs!

great

great chapter

Well that's interesting to say the least. I hope we will have more to read soon.

Thank you for the story. ;)

Ok, you really need to continue this. Blown away, I am.

I'm a bit more interested in Sion's side of the story. Surely, the Jedi have sensed him feeding off the force? Not to mention a SITH star-fighter shooting another ship.

Anyway, great story so far!

AGAIN YEEEEEEY

no fuckin g way updated?¡ YEEEEY

I have to ask... is this set during the Clone Wars or in the time leading up to it? O.o anywho, awsome story so far and I love it :). What I think would be pretty awsome would be if Atton (when he's released, which I presume he will be) is forced to work with Serra lol... Ahh, I can already see it happening -looks into the distance whistfully-.

Also, I was wondering, just as a side note, if you'd be wanting two OC's from Atton's time period that could be in the Jedi Archives under the Exile as known Assosiates (Only if your exile was a male though, can't remember if it was or not ). In my KotOR books, I created two Jedi Knights that were companions of both Revan and the Exile; James Marek and Daniel Newberry. Marek (Ancestor to Starkiller) was a Jedi Gaurdian, though extremly powerful in the force and later put on the Council at age 45, (On par with Revan himself). Newberry was a Jedi Sentinal (On par with Marek and Revan. Had the gift of being able to dominate anyone's mind (though he didn't discover the gift until his travels with the Exile and later became a Master as well, 48). Marek had two lightsabers, a purple and red blade, though eventually after his return to the Jedi (after a brief time as a Sith Lord) he had two purple blades and a prosthetic right arm from the elbow down, curtesy of Newberry. Newberry sported a single silver blade.

Just thought you'd like a few OC's to make it a little differant than just the bog standard timeline :).

YAY! *does happy dance*

Another fantastic chapter, I love Atton, his attitude is awesome! What can I say that you don't already know, you know how I feel about your work! This is really great!

Okay, if there's a blank review from me before this one that was an accident... Anyways. I was really enjoying this... and then it stopped. Why? You should really keep it going! Just remember, "I'm as Atton as Atton will ever be!" Try not to channel Jack Sparrow or James Kirk. They aren't Atton. All things aside though, I thought you did great and were staying true to the one and only Jaq Rand! I really hope you update soon! Thanks for what you have already! :D

Great beginning! Love it so far, looking forward to seeing where it is going! Of course, I'm simply going to have to read and review every chapter, I have a reputation to uphold!

Hope you find some time (and your muse) soon!

An interesting chapter. Especially bringing a relatively unknown person (Keto) in. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I also recommend extending the chapter a little more. For those who haven't played Kotor II. And if not for them consider the fact that you would be able to create the persona of the characters around Atton as well.

Until next time.

Atton's out cold. Oh no! :-(

Update soon, please!