Oh my goodness! You are a brilliant, romantic writer! You made me 'aw' so much during this oneshot. I can't believe Sasuke would be jealous over a pen receiving more of Sakura's affection then himself. How totally cute! The ending was great. Sakura wrote his intials on the pen, how sweet. :]

awwwwwwwwww sooo kawaii i likez! ]

cute...

aww! this one-shot was adorable but sasuke is seriously way to oblivious sometimes, although it would always be cute to read his reaction after he's done something stupid. :) how old are they in this, though? sakura, no offense, sounds younger than she's supposed to be. otherwise, great job!

that is such a cute story 3

very good :) lol i liked how you didnt know why the pen was so important to her and that sasuke took a while, but i liked it alot :)

* mysterious voice* I heard of you before...i heard you're pretty good at what you do...i acknowledge because...THAT STORY WAS ADORABLE! lol it was so cute.. and funny...it lifted my spirits...awesome job!

Good story...Keep writing..It's cute..

That was so sweet 3

AMAZING! I LOVE IT! YOU'RE SO GOOD! But hearty pen? Really? Was that the best name? Haha Joke...GAWD YOURE AMAZING! STUPENDOUS!

I really enjoyed this. 'Hearty Pen'. I like that. I want one! Haha. Keep up the good work.