Great story idea. I liked the epilogue a lot. I'm kind of glad you made it a nice short story instead of smut. Nothing wrong with smut, but there is a lot of it and it's nice to have something new and mroe substantial sometimes.

aw come on! One more chapter please?

Wow, absolutely beautiful story. Your writing is incredible, alluring, captivating; I can't wait to read more of your work.

great story as aways

Very neat story! Thanks!

Omgosh, you should've saved that last note on the bottom for another chapter, haha. I would've LOVED to see Kurogane's/Youou's face XP.

Ahhhhh, I really liked this story! It seems so cool, and Yuuko cameo! I love these guys so much, and I like Fai as a vampire! I like him all happy, but I also like him as himself, and I'm kinda glad I didn't have to see the fight or whatever with Reed, because even though he's a butt-chin and needs to die a horrible death, I'm still kinda tired with fighting scenes, but anyway! I love this story a lot, it's going into my faves! Also, I wish there was a sequel!

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So perfect!

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Perfect! *-*

whaaaat? it ended like that? i was hoping to see Kurogane and Fai kick some evil ass. *pout*

but nonetheless, i just love that scene where Fai became all docile like towards Kurogane. Sooo cute! And a Fai who listen to Kurogane's every command does bring some passionate image to mind. _

such a cruel ending...its such a cliffy lol

I loved it! It was very well written too! ]

Oh my god, that was awesome. Really, super, crazy awesome. I love all the concepts, you're so good at creating and playing them out, though Fai becoming Kurogane's servant XD ah but I know Kuro wouldn't abuse it, having understand. Wow... this is definitely one of your best one shots, and they're all good.

Woahhhhhhhh. Epic.

I like the thing about the thing about the compulsion. I mostly understood it.

And is that all there is? Or is there more?

Either way, it's awesome!