Very beautiful, simple and still sexy. The story is so gentle even though its a sexy theme. Awesome job!

OMG! This is sooo sweet! Once again, I love your descriptions heehee! You are really good at describing characters and scenes. And hehe, especially scenes like this. Normally, I don’t really read fics like this, mainly because well… let’s just face it, some of them are just not all that tasteful, but you managed to make it a really good read and well yeah. Its really good. Besides this is one of my favorite pairings! Heheh! Keep up the good work!

I usually never read lemons (I actually found this via your profile and didn't even note the rating before I finished reading) but I'm glad I stumbled over this little gem.

I once read the difference between a crush and true love is that love makes you better yourself for the sake of another. I loved how well you portrayed exactly that. Thank you!

Well, this was a very enjoyable one-shot. It also is the FIRST M-rated fic involving Cecil and Rosa, and I find it fitting that the author who would write the first one would be of such a high caliber as yourself, so thank you.

Now, I love how you took something that was essentially a lemon fic and made it classy and beautiful. Too many of the said fics are incredibly trashy, with characters grossly going out-of-character and reciting trite, regurgitated lines to appease their unrefined and usually immature audiences. Rather than making a fic with both characters spouting such stereotypical dialog and humping each other like some sex-crazed rabbits (basically making a porno-fic), you take the time to map the Cecil's and Rosa's emotions and feelings. Instead of concentrating on the act of them making love, you concentrate on the love itself. For that, I really have to give you credit.

The writing style is so poetic as well. I love the way you used winter and summer to describe Cecil and Rosa, the way you pictured the characters approaching this first time for them making love, the way you keep them completely true to their nature. They both are approaching the act of making love so passionately and yet they're both so nervous, as though exploring an entirely different world for the first time. Very beautiful.

And based off the way you have written Gealach Breithe, this fic really ties in nicely with it, almost as a "hidden" or extra chapter. The style of writing was beautiful, the characters excellent, the imagery exquisite- I truly loved it. And that's coming from someone who really doesn't tend to like lemons. To be honest, the only reason I read it was because you wrote it and now, I'm glad I did. Very well done.

Guess I've no choice now but to add you as a favorite in the author department. You've got real skill as a writer and display a level of talent I wished more people who perused this website had. Thank you and good luck with your FFIV novelization.

Sincerely,

Ehecatl