nice story keep writing if you haven't quit on it

Pretty good story here. Also pretty funny, too. Pretty interesting idea, having Lana work with a pirate. And for some reason, ever since the whole thing where Lana took her helmet off, the name Strokanov makes me think of beef stroganof...

Whatever happened to the rest of this story. You gave me inspiration for a name, Lana Aran, Samus' child in "Rebirth of a Legend" and it's sequel "Conflict From Within" Didja quit on it or what?
*points at flamer* Oh ye of complete and utter stupidity. I've nothing to say, all I can do is laugh at your moronicity *my own word XP*
I want more!

Ah, flamers. What would I do without my daily dose of pity-inspired humor? Poor, self-esteemless little saps forced to type insulting and derrogatory remakes in a sad, pathetic attempt to make themselves feel like they're something special. Well, bravo for you, my good, courageous man, bravo. I hope you're satisfied with yourself, what with your mindless drivel of self-superiorism. Based on your spelling and grammar, or lack thereof in this case, it's my estimate that you, good sir, are nothing but a lonely little child crying out for attention and love, or you maybe just think that insulting someone else just makes you look cool. Well, being the ever-thinking man that I am, I immediately thought of removing your so-called "review," but I'm going to let it be, so that everyone else reading this review page can point, laugh, and tell their buddies in the room with them what a sorry, sorry, little excuse for a person you are.

your a fuckin moron dumass you took the basic idea of metriod retard go to hell i just skipped all the other chapter loser

This is great! Please write more soon!

I'm loving it man! I've been following this from the beginning and you seem to have caught quite a character in Samus' grandchild. Can't wait for the rest. Oh don't forget to checkout "In One We Will Find A Warrior" Lana, Samus' ma's in there for fifty seconds lol :P I've been thinking bout another story where Lana is the name of Samus' child I don't know though. Anyways good story.

Sometimes when people try a fic like this they blow it. This is actually pretty good! I also like the fact that the two are cooperating with eachother!

This is the start of a great fic, I can feel it. I luv myself some Metroid games, and even though Samus ain't around, the spirit of the series is still most certainly there. I like the Lana/Strokanov relationship too. And FZero and Metroid existing in the same Nintendo universe? Hey...it could happen, but I'm walking if Lana stumbles across the descendants of the Star Fox gang...LOL

Lana is a mean one, takes after her Grandmother very well :). Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter

Ooooh, this is good! Write more soon! And please read my story "Samuel's Discovery."

intriguing but great is the best way i suppose i could describe this chapter. very interesting but yet how are they going to find a moving pirate base? i guess i'll find out next time. good fic keep writing. -Cobra21

heheheh... Just like a pair of ten-year old kids... This is too funny. Keep up the good work!

i love this fic i beg you to write more please before i die of lack of good metroid fan fiction. -Cobra21

woah dude! This fic rox! Rigt more, this is getting intresting! Lana sure does seem determined, eh? lol _ why don't you check out my Metroid fic (-_- the only one i have) o.o it's not as good as this one though .