Great work. I like the way Gohan stood his ground. Go Vegeta.

Great work. Poor Chi..

Wow. Baby Trunks is smarter then chibi Trunks.

Great work.

Go trunks.

Holy crap. Super evil Saiyan Vegeta.

Great work.

Great work.

Great work. Vegeta took Frieza's Gun

Holy Crap! MY heart stop beating.

Great work.

Great work.

Great work.

jeez, why do you hate chi chi so much. **.

As I begin to write this I run things through my mind as I try to come up with something good enough to portray all of my feelings about this story and your writing. I decided that I can't. I can try, but I can't honestly give justice through this one little message. Reading this, was... magnificent. I LOVED it... The way you formed your characters and made them realistic to the serious, your writing style, or creativeness, everything. You're ingenious. Your words should definitely be published some day, and to let you know I'd be the first to buy anything you put out. I have been reading all sorts of fanfiction and such for many years now... and I can say with great confidence that reading this story was much more pleasing and enjoyable than 98% of everything I've ever read on the enternet and most real books. All I can really say is thank you for this. Thank you so much. Please, please never stop gracing the world with your infallible words.