Great story but, please write without the line underneath the letters.

The end of this chapter totally reminds me of the first time Alice and Dana kissed in L word.

Anyway, nice story

This was good, I liked it. You should do like, a prequel to

the epilogue or something. The drama of trying

to adopt - The child might have had an iffy life

before that and will need to learn to trust them,

and then the drama of Cameykinz pregasuarus. And whatever

else you might think of. (: Anyway, I've read like every one

of your stories on here, they're all good and creative so I hope

you write more.

-Holly/Apples

Cute. I love the pseudo-family-ness of this. I just plain out love your stories. (the big bang theory Yay!)

Yay! Remy and CAmeron can be together at last!

I loved this chapter. (Yesssss sex!) I love the word fornicate, in all forms. I also for some reason loved the use of pikachu. I've read a bit of smut..., ppikachu is new. And happy very very very very very very very belated birthday.

I really like this story. (I don't know why.) I'm thinking I should probably watch The L Word.

I loved this story. A sequel is a must. I would be highly upset if there wasn't. I want to find out more about how Cameron and Thirteen are keeping their perfect life together and not falling apart by having children. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL TO THIS! I would love you forever.

I enjoyed the final chapter. Tied up the loose ends well and gave this fic a nice conclusion. ;)

Revenge, never seems to work even if though through.

Love the protectiveness. Well written.

Not sure what to make of Chase's behaviour but he shouldn't have done it.

Wow!

Another intense chapter. Enjoyable ;)

What a first chapter. Loaded with events that have got me hooked.