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| Stormchilde 2006-01-10 ch 2, | abuseAw! Such a sweet moment between two sisters that was over too soon. *Hintnudgehint* :) |
| Claripup 2004-05-22 ch 2, | abuseSo sweet... I cried But I would like to see more... maybe a sequel?? |
| DragonPeaceEnvoy 2004-02-18 ch 2, | abuseNot bad; I got a mysterious tightness in my throat and some watering of my eyes. *emotion* This is a reasonably effective short story (of two chapters, but still short)--it drives home the message. Poignant message at that. (T_T) Sincerely C-P-E AKA Loretta |
| AP Especially 2002-12-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseI can see why Kris would eventually follow in Jill's footsteps and join forces with Charlie. Nice story. |
| Duke 2002-09-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseI like the way that Jill trys to make amends to her baby sister. Also Kris as the young child trying to be older than she is is a great characterization. Great job MaryRose. |
| Ali 2002-03-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseLOL....well that was sweet. A bit short, but then again, how many complexities could an 8yo have, right? LOL I liked it! I always wondered what they were like as little kids..... Very cute :) |
| Amanda 2002-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute story please keep up the good work. |
| Karen 2002-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute story. Keep writing. |
| Krystina 2002-03-07 ch 1, | abuseAwww...thats cute! :) |