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Reviews For: Separate Sisters

Stormchilde
2006-01-10
ch 2,
abuseAw!
Such a sweet moment between two sisters that was over too soon.
*Hintnudgehint*
:)
Claripup
2004-05-22
ch 2,
abuseSo sweet... I cried
But I would like to see more... maybe a sequel??
DragonPeaceEnvoy
2004-02-18
ch 2,
abuseNot bad; I got a mysterious tightness in my throat and some watering of my eyes. *emotion* This is a reasonably effective short story (of two chapters, but still short)--it drives home the message. Poignant message at that. (T_T)
Sincerely C-P-E AKA Loretta
AP Especially
2002-12-24
ch 2, anon.
abuseI can see why Kris would eventually follow in Jill's footsteps and join forces with Charlie. Nice story.
Duke
2002-09-10
ch 2, anon.
abuseI like the way that Jill trys to make amends to her baby sister. Also Kris as the young child trying to be older than she is is a great characterization. Great job MaryRose.
Ali
2002-03-22
ch 2, anon.
abuseLOL....well that was sweet. A bit short, but then again, how many complexities could an 8yo have, right? LOL I liked it! I always wondered what they were like as little kids..... Very cute :)
Amanda
2002-03-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseCute story please keep up the good work.
Karen
2002-03-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseCute story. Keep writing.
Krystina
2002-03-07
ch 1,
abuseAwww...thats cute! :)
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