totally awesome and somehow true to character.. this one is my favourite amongst all your stories... please write more.. i am a fannnn,,,

Truly amazing work. You brought Ren's feelings through extremely well and made the experience real. Please continue writing. There is real talent here.

I'M SAD.

That this is over, I mean.

It was definitely a nice, long read. It was so depressing, reading about Ren being out of the loop and how Kyoko tried so hard to bring him back. It just reminded me of other sad love stories that I heard or read where one person does everything for the other and they don't even realize it.

I'm just really glad they had their happy ending. Well, fornow. Q_Q

wow juicy! and two long shot chapter, very detail and great... full of mental issue and the ending is soooo beautiful. like some magic to brake evil curse. and you know what I'm thinking... in the end of chapter 164, Kyoko's friend from box r cast have a thinking that maybe kyoko have something for ren. so I remembered Kyoko's monolog at the end of chapter 78, when Kyoko receive corn back after ren kissed it. she said that there will be some curse or black magic, hahahah thinking about it now, it really gives us some clue right? anyway, I'm rambling, just because it's come to the end of dark moon and somehow that monolog really bugging me out, thinking about Kyoko's reaction and that black magic. ah... it's hard to described it. Love You alita

O_O I REALLY hope this happens...

Nice work so far! Some mistakes in spelling and grammar, but fortunately just a few

Oh, and I doubt any doctor in the world would send someone home, who is so obviously deeply traumatized! The phenomenum "trauma" has been aknowleged as an official "disease" in the 70s (I think), so every doctor should know it. But I like the story anyway!

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That was beautiful. Simply beautiful.

Woah, so much emotional drama! Loved it! Dunno about breakthroughs in the manga yet, but I love the fact that the current arc has so much Kyouko x Ren interaction. The last time Kyouko loved playing a role so much, she completely fell for the actor playing opposite her (albeit in a father-daughter way), so here's hoping the intense interaction with Ren will awaken and make her realise the romantic feelings that they already share... Here's hoping anyway. Anyway, thanks for the read, as always! :)

this is wonderful! Thank you so much for it!

The emotions were conveyed beautifully and successfully :)

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Yo estaba llegando cerca del final solo me faltaba una hoja y media (si me lo imprimí para leerlo tirada en la cama) y pensaba: NOOOO, no puedo estar tan cerca del final, falta que pasen muchas cosas!. Y nuevamente me sorprendiste y me encanto el final.

Solo espero que no pase algo así en el Manga por que al ritmo que va tardarí años en suceder, mi ansiedad no lo soportaría. En fin...

Muchas gracias por compartir tus historias

oh this is wonderful...Very good job

ah, again a great story *happy*

this became one of my absolute favourites! i like it really much! the picture of ren and kyoko together in the wood...ha, i can practically see them gleam with joy the both of them are real outdoor-kids

i would love to read a sequel to it, maybe something lemony? i know, he promised not to do anything to her, but i doubt he can resist any longer, now that he told her his feeling...and she clearly could have enjoyed the "foreplay" two days ago, if it wouldnt be for the circumstances and if he would have been nicer... please ()

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WOW.

Intense. I can understand why you re-posted it as a separate story.

...WOW.

I feel like begging for continuation of this...sounds like in the end she was reacting positively to his love confession.. not just not running away, but leaning on him intimately.. that's an okay sign, right? Ren seemed to take it that way by embracing her in response.

Kinda want to read the continuation where he tells her everything after they got together..

but oh well, you already wrote plenty of stories of them together, so I guess I won't be greedy this time.. LOL

Interesting take on prediction for the next chapter.. not likely to happen in the manga, but hey, like you said, that's why we have fanfics to write and read.