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| anonomyous 2008-07-11 ch 27, anon. | abusegreat story but the ending was sorta disappointing. i was hoping with for a bit more drama, like harry blowing up with anger or something. but hey, its ur story. i liked it overall, in fact, your story was the first one where i didn't actually get confused with everyones children ad such. XDXD |
| CrayonsPink 2008-04-13 ch 27,  | abuseI loved this story, it was EXCELLENT! I'm going to read the sequal right now! |
| Loonalily 2008-04-11 ch 27, | abuseReally cool fic, I'm seriously impressed. This actually had me on the edge of my seat, excellent use of suspense. I'm going to read the sequal now! |
| gothic-hands 2008-03-08 ch 27, | abuseI love your story, but... It's not a very good idea to put a story down as complete, if it actually cuts off in the middle of the story, and then opens in another story, because the plot in no way, is complete... And if you had it all listed together, people could search longer stories and have it come up, rather then have them show up as two short stories. Other then that, your story is very well done. Having the pastry/bakery is a very interesting and original idea. And your plot is very different then all the other stories I"ve read so far on Fanfiction, Hermione is still shrill hermione, so you've kept everyone in character, a very good feat :D |
| winderful3 2007-12-09 ch 27, | abusei must say, i really hate hermionie in this story. i know she is what made them discover him.. but i dont know why i dislike her so much |
| barmy-ol-badger 2007-11-14 ch 27, anon. | abuseYAY! According to the thingy bar at the top of the page this your 900th review! You should feel privleged that someone of my status would review. lol ^^. Seriously though... erm... right... sorry about that... just discovered that my capability for beng serious lasts up till- hey! is that a bar of chocolate! ;P In all seriousness i loved your story... although the end was more like a beginning and an end... and i am just about to go to your author page to read the sequel... so you must be doing something right! Plus, even though the characters are OOC, theyre not tacky Mary McSues. (Yes the proper term is Mary Sue, but personally McSue just gives it a more... monotonous feel!) Keep up with your writing... its brill! Barmy-ol-badger |
| sarah elizabeth snape 2007-10-15 ch 27, | abuseGreat story. |
| Jane-Fonda 2007-09-23 ch 27, | abuseo...mg... LUV IT! ur sequal is da best as well. im just kinda reviewing u from this story... but ya i like the way u made Harry so in denial. and sorry, but i dont like hermione. she's bossy. anyway, update ur sequal soon! thanks! |
| Olaf74 2007-09-18 ch 26, | abuseI'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible. |
| Olaf74 2007-09-17 ch 25, | abuseI'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible. |
| Olaf74 2007-09-16 ch 24, | abuseI'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible. |
| Olaf74 2007-09-12 ch 19, | abuseBrilliant. Absolutely Brilliant. Please continue it very soon! |
| Olaf74 2007-09-07 ch 5, | abuseBrilliant. Absolutely Brilliant. Please continue it vbery soon. |
| sillya 2007-08-30 ch 4, | abusegreat |
| HPObsession22 2007-06-30 ch 27, | abuseOh brilliant story! |