I think it is good. Maybe it is starting a little slow but it is good. I like a story about NPCs. Finish it up and keep writin

Man...must you keep tortureing us w/this junk...hahaha...man my story is going kick yours :)...Baldur's Gate all the way...Diablo sUx :)

Cool. I still wonder about Atma. But we don't need any outlandish heros! We'll just use the characters already in the story! Brilliant!

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cool background for Geglash, you're on a roll.

keep it up...

a/n - i got the second chapter up and the formatting fixed, for the most part. it still won't let me do italics, and that's really starting to get on my nerves, let me put it this way. if you find a part that doesn't really make sense, put those words in italics and that's probably how it's supposed to be. I use that for the peoples thoughts. well anyways, thanks for your help,

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hmM, cool new insight on Atma and Geglash! Always tought of Geglash as a drunken coward, however here he seems more of the hero type. cool. now I wonder why with all the people in Sanctuary, would Mephisto bother Atma? oh well...

hope you keep this fic goin', your writin' iz good. curious plot too. keep it up, plz...

Keep going though I never suspected Atma was important enough for Mephisto to worry about. Hope you win your bet though I haven't read that other persons stuff. : )

So far, it's good. Just be more carefull with separating paragraphs, it will make reading easier.

Don't take what this moron says to heart, he's the one i'm having the competition with... ok? sorry about the formatting, i'll try to get that fixed sometime soon, k? /

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Man...this story is pretty gay...but oh well...