This was really well written. I think that Kelly would have loved Tony if she'd lived and yeah, she'd have wanted Tony and her dad together. Great job.

good start on the story so far please update

Great story. I love the idea of Kelly surviving and Tony & Gibbs falling in love.

Enjoyed the clever way you chose to convey this and would love to see you expand this au universe.

That was good!

You should continue with it...even if only a few chapters. Kelly could decide to get them together before she starts college...maybe get the team involved.

They could do everything from secret admirer gifts to a blind date...and if that don't work...lock them up somewhere alone. And if drastic measures are needed..they can always have Ducky slip them something to knock them out-remove their clothes-and lock them up!

OOooooooh now this was really good-I think you should continue the story :) You know...have that unrequited love be not so unrequited, and tell it from Kelly's POV. :)

Love Jen