Oh my ra I love this series soooooooooooo much! You are the queen! I am amazed be the psycological thought you put througout the whole thing and now I have the hardest time watching the show without thinking about htem being together! haha, you've done an absolutely amazing job connecting the real stuff with your creation and you are the reason I worship prideshipping! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love all the complex twists and turns you've thrown in, especially with Bakura! I'm almost feeling bad for him now! (Almost, haha) I really hope whatever medical problems you're having are getting better! And I'm not only saying that so that you can update, that's just an added bonus. ;)
It's sad to see you're going on hiatus, and even sadder to know you're still unwell, but I totally understand if you're struggling to juggle you're life right now - I'm still in awe that you've managed to do it for the past few years, and still get out a weekly chapter! So much though I'm going to miss this story for however long it will be, I'm just glad that you're taking time for yourself to get things sorted out.
On the subject of this chapter, it was well worth the wait. I loved the tension between Ogata and Kaiba, especially when he was pinned down. This story's really getting into the darker parts of all their souls. And I'm guessing that Bakura taught Seto how to pick pockets
Anyway, will miss you lots, and I hope things turn out well for you soon!
Xxx
kawaiiloonie 2/21/12 . chapter 43
Great Chapter. I got worried when i read about your medical problems but i always say health come before anything else. So get well and don't worry, my thoughts on the wait i think i have already said them, and i'll say them again: things worth something are woth waiting for them. So anyway get well and among the good things is good to know that it isn't life threatening. Take car and hope to hear from you on twitter!
Listen, Kami. We love you way too much to ever be mad at you for something that just happens, there's nothing you can do about it and that's okay. I hope everyone who reads your stories will be smart enough to know that even if the chapters are years and years apart, they're worth waiting for! You're a fantastic writer, and a fantastic life juggler, and don't blame yourself for the screwballs life throws at you. I hope you get better really soon, that you continue to be fantastic, and that you always remember we love you and we'll be waiting!
I'm glad you are okay if not well. I was worried. Poor Ogata is still confused but Kaiba gave him a lot of time to think. I'm glad he is going home to Yami. I look forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes. Get better and feel better and most of all rest.
Blueberry 2/19/12 . chapter 43
Hey Kami!
First off, I'm sorry to hear you're sick and I hope you will get better fast :) Secondly, I like this chapter very much - the tension between the boys feels very real, but maybe you could find a guy for Ogata, so he won't feel sad for never having Kaiba? :)
Good luck with your health and I'm looking forward to see in here again sometime :)
Read everything from te start (Entangled Series 1-11). Took me almost a whole week. Good thing about being unemployed I guess.
You're a very good writer. One of the best fanfics out there about yugioh.
I really hope you continue this story. I so wanna know what's going to happen to Bakura, poor guy. But still, Seto/Yami is the best thing :D, really love that pairing.
You're going to my alert section. I hope I get a mail soon with the next chapter.
Wow, I love how brilliant this fanfic is. You're writing is amazing!
Personally, I don't mind waiting so long for an update, so the schedule doesn't bother me.
I would really like to see a multichapter fic, like this one, about the Ancient Egypt part, I think you hinted about it in Another Lesson or Catnip Dream. It would be really good to see things from Seto's time, rather than Kaiba's.
Also, I have a few questions regarding Forbidden, so if you could PM me when your internet is working, that'd be great
Is it wrong that I'm really starting to feel sorry for Bakura? I mean, he clearly loves Kaiba/Seto, but Kaiba's never going to leave Yami, so 'Kura can't win :( Poor guy.
No worries about the posting schedule - I know how it feels to be snowed under with things :) Ive only jsut caught up on reading the last two chapters anyway. Either way, I'm really enjoying this story, and I'm really looking forward the next update :)
Niko: Nii-sama, hug otōto for me *snuggles into Mokie's arms, still sobbing*
Yami: H-Hug? *glances at Bakura*
Bakura: *death glare* Try it and you're dead, Pharaoh
Yami: *holds up hands* Wasn't going to! Why, imōto?
Niko: I can't be-believe otōto has the sa-same pr-problem as m-me...
Mokuba: What problem?
Niko: *points at story* Apply that to school
Mokuba: Oh. I didn't know you liked anyone at school like THAT...
Niko: *irritated* There's a lot you guys don't know.
Yami: Aw, Niko...
Niko: *sniffle*
Bakura: *softer voice* Ane...
Niko: *head shoots up* Did you just call me ane?
Bakura: Did I?
Niko: *smiles* Love you too
Bakura: N-Now wait just a minute!
Niko: Oh, this chapter was just beautiful, touching, absolutely heart-wrenching! To see that otōto has such a devotion to someone, I can totally relate to that Y_Y unfortunately.
Yami: Unfortunately? Why?
Niko: I don't wanna talk about it
Mokuba: Oh come on, Nikk, you can tell us anything.
Niko: Not right now... maybe when we're back in person. Anyway, *turns to authoress* I loved this chapter, and I do hope your internet is fixed up permanently, and soon! Keep writing, keep breathing, and don't worry about your loyal fans, we'll make it a week or two without. Do what ya gotta do, and don't forget to smile and have fun! Bye now! *logs off Skype*
(Ohio)
Yami: *staring at Bakura* ...
Bakura: What?
Yami: I'm debating whether or not to actually hug you. Like imōto said.
Bakura: NO WAY IN HELL *furious*
Seto: *pulls Yami away* You calm down *points at Bakura* You don't egg him on.
Bakura/Yami: Hmph! *folds arms*
Seto: *sigh* For once, I can't wait 'til Niko gets back O.O NOBODY HEARD THAT, THAT NEVER HAPPENED
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