 candy4yourEYEZ 10/26/10 . chapter 1This was amazing. I don't know how you do it (come up with new story ideas, that is). My muse seems to have left me :(
Gaah, time travel confuses me, but this is amazing anyways *drools*
BUT THIS IS JUST AWESOME *keeps rereading it* |
 Kita Kitsune 10/25/10 . chapter 1...I just read all of your FrUK oneshots over the past three days.
YAYFELLOWFRUKFAN! *_* They're so in-character, it's wonderful.
I'm sorry I couldn't leave a review for everything - perhaps when i go back to re-read them? x.o;; But, yes. Quite a breath of fresh air from the smut-based stories the little fangirls write. They have depth! And characterization! And actually feel like literature! And they're FrUK, which is always hard to find... I can't believe you don't have more review. D: I'm rec-ing you whenever I find the time to update one of my own fics
Hurrah, hurrah! High five! ...although the fairy!Arthur and sadnoble!Ripvanwinkle!France one was cool, too. I've actually had an idea to write something like that (as well as the vampire one, actually...) - not exactly the same, of course. Completely different focus. But fairy!Arthur is just so fun to imagine, isn't it? xDDD ;;
Thank you for writing all these, seriously! I couldn't read anything else until I'd gotten through all your little FrUK drabbles. *_* Eeee, so in-character and not 'all gussied up' into romantic drivel, it made me happy...
...and, of course, this one was hilarious. xD ;;; Your oneshots make me want to continue them. x.o;;; W-Which I completely shouldn't, not only because they're YOUR ideas, but because I'd fizzle out on the idea about half-way through... x.o;;;
S-Seriously... I guess this is to make up for not reviewing those 60 or 100 or whatever-many FrUK oneshots you have, on here? I've Favorited a few, and was happy to see this update! :3 Uwah, keep writing FrUK, it made me so happy to see a bunch of well-written stories about them (even if they were short, I just loved the ideas in them, so it's perfectly, wonderfully fine)
[ ...you have a tiny obsession with describing Arthur and Francis' eyes as 'fairy eyes', don't you? xDDD ;;;;;;; Ehe, I noticed ...sorta. o.o; Eep! Rambling! x.x Will stop now. Thank you for writing all these, you have no idea how much I enjoyed them I'll be re-reading them for quite some time to come. :333 ] |
 agrajagthetesty 10/25/10 . chapter 1I'm sorry to have to say this, but I couldn't finish reading this story. I was just so thrown off by the mention of pitchforks. The stereotypical mob only carries pitchforks because it's made up of peasants and that's what they would have to hand. A mob made up of urban workers would never carry pitchforks, as they would have no reason to own them.
I know it seems like a nitpick, but it's actually really important to think about things like this. Sometimes (like in my case, right now) one mistake can be confusing or off-putting enough that people won't want to continue reading. It's a shame, since it's not about your writing, which isn't at all bad. But you need to make sure what you've written makes logical sense. |
 dreamingallthetime 10/24/10 . chapter 1I liked this, but I must admit to confusion. This is AU right? Do Arthur and Francis live really long lives, or just skip around in time? Anyway, this was really good! Your stories always seem to capture their relationship so perfectly. |