 A Zelda Fan 7/24/04 . chapter 14 Erico, you've done it again! Great job! |
 Andor 12/11/02 . chapter 3AMAZING!
One error: "He’s the head of Dragmire Industries and is the richest man in the whole world he just exceeded Bill Gates..." Betwixt "world" and "he" put a period and capital.
Once again: AMAZING! |
 Xzar6 3/10/02 . chapter 14 This writing is some of the best i have ever read. Rarely can such detail as seen here be found. I commend you two on a well written story. |
 RACHEL 3/9/02 . chapter 14 I ROCKED! YOU GUYS ARE SOOOOOOOO GOOD! I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT! I HOPE U GUYS WRITE MORE! TOODLES! |
 tjy111 3/9/02 . chapter 14 i never played Zelda, but it is quite a good read |
 ZCrystal 3/7/02 . chapter 3Wow, that was very good. I was very impressed with how fluidly the transitions from dialog to action were, and the plot seems good so far. Nice job. |