This is excellent! The story's hilarious, and you kept everybody in character really well! This is probably the most in-character fanfic I've ever read for any anime/manga/etc. You really captured Hitsugi's character perfectly. What you wrote about Tatewaki (her thoughts/the fan, and how she was being forgotten by the readers, etc) were hilarious, as well as Hitsugi commenting on what a good "partner" Akira seems to be. XD So many things in this story had me literally laughing out loud. You're as talented as Hayashiya! I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work. ]

Do a longer one, onegai! Kaichou/Shizuku is my favorite pairing! XD

This is great! Haha, I was laughing through the whole thing. I think you did a wonderful job of keeping the charaters in...uh, charater! Poor, t-tate-...um...I forget how to spell her name -_-" Heheee...Good job!

Awsome, I really liked it, do an Akira one!