It's a shame Tales of the Otori isn't as famous as other books out there, because there are so few fanfics of it that it gets annoying.

I must say -however- that I like your story. English is not my mother language, so there should be a lot of things that escape my sight, but I find it well written, with good rythm and a good story.

I hope you update it soon.

And please, don't demoralize yourself because of the visits to your story (which I suppose are a lot less than a Harry Potter story...) or by the few reviews you're receiving. I also write on a fandom that isn't as known as others and I know it can get very annoying sometimes, but there are people out there reading you.

Keep the story going! :D

the second line doesn't flow right for some reason- I think a missing word perhaps.

But I enjoyed this! Wonder what is going to happen next!