This has to be the best ten minute redux of the game EVER. Like, I would pay to see this come out.

... Actually, that's a lie. But I would convince someone in my life to pay for it for me. :D

I'm favoriting this story for many reasons. But the most important of all is Squall getting paid by the word 'whatever.' Kudos to you. And thank you. XD

I love it.

Lol, this fic made me 'LMAO'! XD

"Boogie woogie your bon bon, Laguna." Funniest quote.

Look forward to reading more of your works. :)

Ash XX

Haha, I'd have to say the funniest part of this particular fic was your little epilogue at the end. Good ol' Kiros, "Boogie-woogie your bon-bon".. sounds like something from the Wiggles.

lol. this was a great story. I loved it!

short, sweet, and to the point: FUNNY. _0

LMAO! that was really funny! And done in only 10 minutes? how amazing! lol. boogie woogie your bon bon, lmao! how do you come up with this stuff? I especially loved Squall's whatever part (getting paid everytime he said it) and Rinoa's razor sharp legs! And lets MOOSEY! hehe, poor cloud! Im loving it!

Kimmie

That was fun. And funny. It was exceptionally good for a ten-minute fic.

O_O I'm... at a loss for words. It was funny, is all I can say. And I SO love the "SEIFER, OVERSEXED" line.

Boogie-woogie your bon-bon, Laguna. HAHAHAHA *falls over laughing* like Crunchbucket said, if you can write something this good in ten mins. damn you're a genius. _ tee hee, have fun writin' more!

I must now go laugh hysterically.

I like this fic. I like the Rinoa-bashing. I don't like the Kiros-bashing. please don't do that again, K? -xxx- little tiger.

LOL! That was great! Even the Kiros bashing! I gotta find more of this stuff. -Kinneas

*chokes on a bigger pretzel* ! sheer genius.

where did you e ver get such an idea for a story? It's so funny!