| Reviews for Not on my Watch |
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Lynnp 12/24/12 . chapter 81A wonderful story Caprice. I thought that Nathan's eulogy was spot on. I also loved the line Fair winds and a following sea, it always brings a lump to my throat. And of course to see skyQuest sailing on the sparkling sea, lovely! Thanks again for your wonderful talent and for sharing it with us. Lynn xxx |
Lynnp 12/24/12 . chapter 80Glad that Ben & Katie are (a) going to remarry, and (b) rejoining the SeaQuest. I loved the line about her sharing her quarters with Brody lol! Lynn xxx |
Lynnp 12/24/12 . chapter 79What a shame about Kendall; he definitely deserves the medal of honour. Lynn xxx |
Lynnp 12/24/12 . chapter 78Oh no, I do hope Kendall will be alright. What a brave man! Still trying to read this before work finishes! Lynn xxx |
Lynnp 12/24/12 . chapter 77Another chapter read! It's amazing that Tony is up already! I don't think I would be like that if I'd received a bullet lol! I really felt for Kristin in this one, she must be so drained. Will try to read more before I go home for the Christmas holidays, although I will be back at work on Thursday. Lynn xxx |
Lynnp 12/24/12 . chapter 76Finally been able to catch up! I'm sorry it's been so long, but things are changing at work so I won't have anywhere as much time as I used to, so will only be able to read periodically. Now, I know this story is finished (a long time ago!) but I intend to read it all bit by bit, only another 5 chapters to go! I'm really pleased Tony is going to be okay btw! This is my last day at work, so if I'm unable to read any more today I wish you a lovely Christmas and a very prosperous 2013, you deserve it Caprice! Lynn xxx |
Mathisblu 9/27/12 . chapter 81Please don't apologize about writing this story so long! It was worth it discovering a new chapter and so on, and on. A good story has nothing to do about how long it is but about captivating imagination and you gave this to us readers. So for each one of the many chapters of this wonderful story, I want to thank you for all the marvelous moments I had reading you. Thank you CF Vici, for your generosity and IMAGINATION. |
Mirage24 9/27/12 . chapter 81 I'm reviewing again because I don't think the first time around I fully expressed how much I loved not just this story, but every story you've written thus far, including the first two in this set. Not On My Watch really pulled them all together, I feel, and even though it's over now, it'll have me thinking for days. I loved the setup to the final arc, I loved that all along the way Mary, the events of If, and all of the old baddies were brought back FOR that final arc. I truly think the entire story was brilliance, from plot to the way you took the crew and made them into what they should have been; like Ben coming out more responsible, Ford more caring, Brody into a family man from what he was when he was introduced into season 2, Lucas growing up and even making people care for an OC like we did for Kendall (which I don't see a lot of around this site, not just in this fandom). So THANK YOU for all of your amazing work, and while I hope to see you around here again soon, I know you'll always write amazing stories no matter what genre they are :) |
mirage24 9/27/12 . chapter 813 weeks? Bridger was right. It felt like a lifetime. I love that the ending involved SkyQuest and Nathan thinking about seeing it for the first time from his cell on If- another story that seems like it happened so long ago. What seems like the prevention of the Macronesian War also is a great ending (probably how it should have been in canon). Even if this story was long, I don't think the length took anything away from it. I wasn't even always caught up every time you posted a chapter (sorry!), and it still felt just right to me. I mean, you had to get the crew put back together after If, set up what was essentially a new season finale for season 2, with all the major players, and then play out that plot. I enjoyed all of it, even Gynocracy! Basically, don't apologize for a long story! Every step of the way was interesting and very well written! While I do hope you write another seaQuest story, I understand if you take a break (and encourage it if that's what you're doing next!) I will hope to be soon reading your original fiction in the meantime! Have a great end of your week, and I'll see you around! (Adding you to my Following Authors list... you're probably already there, but just in case :D) |
mirage24 9/27/12 . chapter 80I didn't review on the last chapter because I didn't know exactly what to say since I'm still sad about Kendall but this chapter was way more uplifting. I'm glad to see Katie will be back on seaQuest and that she and Ben have plans to remarry. I'm interested to see where this ends. On to the next! |
mirage24 9/26/12 . chapter 78:( I hope he took them with him! |
mirage24 9/26/12 . chapter 77Ha! I love that she sent them to pediatric. Seems like things are really getting tense but I feel like something bad is about to happen to Kendall. And sure, he's an OC, but how could you NOT like him? Thanks for a great chapter :) |
anonymous 9/26/12 . chapter 81 If only I had known this was so close to the end, I'd have said something much sooner than when I did. Well, all I can say is that this was a perfect ending. I like that you left it open to possibilities. I'd love to see you write a new story very soon as I truly love and enjoy your work. Thank you so much for everything you've done for the world of seaQuest. |
Susan M. M 9/26/12 . chapter 81Good story. Good conclusion. |
darkin520 9/26/12 . chapter 81I think I'm going to cry. This is such a bittersweet moment for me. First, this was the perfect ending to such a phenomenal story. You've made us feel a whirlpool of emotions with this: joy, sadness, worry, triumph...just a few of the many things you've put us through. But I enjoyed every minute of it. And I just love what you've done with our crew. You've taken it, transformed it, and created what should have been. And for all your efforts and hard work, pouring your heart and soul into this, I am forever grateful to you You've kept seaQuest alive long after its death, and I do hope you can one day grace with another masterpiece. But you and I both know the possibilities of that. I know I have told you I will support you with whatever you decide, help you in any way I can, but it will be really hard for me to see you go. I have followed this story since before I joined the site. I know back then I was an awful reviewer, and I'm sorry. But I think I've made up for it now. From the moment I began writing, you've been a dear friend, and I am so grateful for everything you've done...not just your writing. I do hope you know how much I love you for that. I wish you the best of luck, and I hope that you stay in touch. I know that you will always write, and I wish you all the happiness in the world. I hope you get everything you want and more. So, one last time, I say I loved it and I love you. And I can't wait to see what you do next. :') |