Honestly, this was pretty in-character. Not entirely, but almost. But, who says Douglas and Steinmetz are dead? Well, maybe the actors are dead, I don't really remember...

Awww I LUV it! I wish their were more Herbie fanfics like this one! This is AMAZING! AWESOME job!

I love it! :) I can't wait to see more, it's sad there is almost no Fanfic on Herbie, he such an awesome car! So I'm excited to see someone make a new fanfic story and excited to see more in the future. Keep it up! I really recommend to see the other movies when you get the chance they are really really good! The last one before Herbie fully loaded wasn't thaaat good, but it was interesting to see a new plot and find out how Herbie came to be, and especially seeing his evil twin brother. ;)

You want a suggestion? Try looking for some herbie movie on youtube. Somtimes you cabn find clips from the movies. You could try to write one from the loe bug (1) Herbie movie or Herbie Goes to MonteCarlo 3.

Love it. This is the only movie I've seen, too!