It's pretty good; is there going to be more?

Telling a story we have all heard of but don't know what a great idea wish I had it first. Please keep writing I want to see what happens next.

So happy you kept writing this! It's got a good feel to it, real Matthew Reilly style. And thanks for the explanation about "Oakley," definitely makes sense now, in fact, it's a nice little piece of backstory.

looking forward to the next chapter!

wow poor Schofield!

'Oakley' :D it suits him!

Please update soon This is a fantastic story, can't wait for more!

Love this! I always thought that he would be like this soon after his rescue, he had just been tortured for days and can't see at the moment. You captured this beautifully!

Great idea!

Really enjoyed the story, especially vulnerable scarecrow.

One question, why is his call sign "oakley"? Assuming that refers to his sunglasses but wouldn't he have not needed them prior to this story?

I hope you continue!

Poor Scarecrow...

This is really good! I love the last part.

Please continue! _