Absolutely perfect. What else is there to say? I really felt as if I was there watching everything play out. Though short, you had the characters down to a T, and your portrayal of the dialogue was well presented. All easy to read and enjoyable too.

Thank you so much for this!

Love AJLL x

Very nice story. I don't think that I ever read about Alexander's wedding night from Pharnakes POV but the whole scenario is very realistic.

I hope you will right more stories.

thanks for sharing.

Delos13

As Pharnakes, I wish he'd have listened to those words!

nice plot! any chance of another chapter?

Hello,

I always love to read about Hephaistion as you describe him: beautiful and ureachable, a great convination :D

This part of their lives is very sad, or at least for me, since Alexander got married, but I like a lot how you took the attention to Hephaistion in this story.

Really nice work.

Zophiel