Awesome job. Love it. More soon please. Catch ya on the flip side.

I love this story! It's nice to see the Winchester boys getting rewarded a little for all the stuff they do. Very clever writing!

Wow I loved the first scene, I love Sam talking all that useless stuff he learns, that's just like him ahaha

See you next post, then

Rosetta

I'm still here, still reading your stuff when I should be busy writing my own (don't tell anyone!). I loved how things went down with Sam in this chapter. Its hard going from unregistered to flavor of the month on the school popularity scale. Poor Sammy has the worst luck. Even his good karma comes back to bite him.

Real life kept me from reading this story for quite some time, but now I finally got some time to spare ;) And I'm glad I decided to read it, because as usual it's great. You definitely managed to drag me into the story from the first minute!

Trouble just seems to attract those boys it would seem. Love the interactions between Sam and Dean, the bond between them is really unbelievable and rather scary sometimes too. I can't imagine what a burden it must be for Dean sometimes, to be ordered to look after your brother the night your mother dies and living solely for that purpose now it seems, always afraid to fail him as he did his mother...

Absolutely love your take on John. Great to see him in another way than the show always pictured him: a closed off man, who seems to take his sons for granted. Love how you write him now as a man who clearly loves his sons andtruly wants to be there for them. Knowing he is failing them by always leaving, but jist can't help it. I started to think of John as someone with a severe OCD. He doesn't want to hunt and leave his sons, but hte moment he hears about even the possibility of one being there it takes over his mind and he can't think of anything else untill the jobs done...

Hope you get what I mean ;)

And poor Dean in this chapter, trying to help Annie but ending up hurting her even more...

Hope you'll update soon. :D

Great update. Thank you.

Hi you

Aw damn, that's exactly what I feared :-( Of course Annie wouldn't believe him, and I fear there's gonna be even worse to come for him - poor Dean.

I'm looking forward fro more, as always, and right now I dunno what else to say. So I'll just stop and hope somehow, all will be well. Or, well enough at least.

Nice touch, with the money, and btw, I love how the principal turned into such a nice guy when there were heroes involved. Just like telling the hospital that you have private health insurance...

I'm not yet convinced they got the right bad guy, though. I mean, it sounds like they did, but what if they didn't? Maybe there's some other guy doing it?

See ya!

Yay! An update! Sorry for the excessive exclamation, I just love updates. Awesome chapter as usual, Im looking foward to more.

Ahhh, Sweetie! This was beautiful! And the plot thickens and rots! Poor Dean - how my heart does ache for him so!

I can hardly wait for the next chapter, lovie - chalk up another epic adventure! You are kickin ass and taking names!

*SMISHES*

Mandy

Thank You for the new chapter.

Have to say I don't have the answer to this mystery but I still have some doubt about whether Marcus is the killer/kidnapper or not. He probably is but sometimes things just seem too pat. But with the ghost involved, well, this isn't pat at all.

Poor Dean. He told the truth and then got told to get his head examined. Ah, such is his life.

I know there is no way Dean is going to just forget about Linda's ghost. She isn't gone by a long shot.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Thank You.

stick around? where else would I go? I think Dean made a very convincing argument, way to go and I think they should keep that money!

Moooore huuuuurt Saaaaaam :) Pretty please? Haha, love it anyway!

My thought on the money and why Dean was hesitant to tell his father was that Dean did want to keep the money. Just that he wanted it for Sam and himself. Not for his father to spend on ammo. Dean would use the money on his family, and John would spend it on the hunt. So, in some ways, it's easier for Dean to give the money back, then to be disappointed with his father and how he would have used the money.

I wonder what his finally discussions will be.

I think Dean was right to try and tell Annie what was really going on. She is obviously upset about it. Dean was hoping to releive her of some of the quilt. I guess I can't be too surprised by her reaction, but I think that she will come to believe pretty soon. Sounds like you aren't quiet done with Linda yet.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Anne

The plot thickens: looks like there is a hunt here after all, at least to Dean. Too bad Annie was not receptive to Dean's revelation. Good chapter.

Another great chapter. This is such an amazing story. I definitely agree with Dean about trying to give the money back. Plain and simply it doesn't matter if you need the money it's all a matter of pride. I knew it wasn't a good idea for Dean to tell Annie the truth, even though I understand why he did it. So, I wonder if Linda really is haunting Annie? At least then she might actually believe Dean. And Bobby's suppose to be showing up? I can't wait. I love Dean and Bobby's relationship. Anyway, update soon.