wow, that was beautiful. Well written and excellently thought out.

You are added. Pleas come and visit.

Aww, this is a sweet story. :)

Wow, I don't think I've ever read a more beautiful and entrancing tale in my whole life... You made me feel like I was really on Saberius, with Saba and everyone. Very very (etc...) good story.

This story was very good. It tells the story of Saba's origins so well!

I love your writing style! If you're the same Cyndi that left a review for me thank you. It's so visiual. I can really see it all happening! Tense. Truly wonderful! I absolutely LOVED the ending.

Neat story! Saba is cool and I really liked how you came up with his origins. I'll think of this story whenever I see him :)

Hi, I have to applaud your work. This is one of the best pieces I have seen in a while. And please don't do a sequel - it would just spoil it... It's perfect the way it is. Do, however, write more other stuff. Cheers. SD