| Reviews for Ubducted |
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DaniellePayne609 10/3/12 . chapter 1Please write more! i love it! |
KTrevo 7/20/12 . chapter 1Please update soon! I am totally addicted to this show... Anyway. Just a thought: you might get more readers if you change your typo in your title- instead of Ubducted, change it to Abducted. |
EdwardCullenROX 10/9/11 . chapter 1Wow this is really interesting sttory plzzz continue this FF Waiting for ur update |
OwenHarpersGirl 6/18/11 . chapter 1This is good :) You've got me hooked already :) I really hope you continue with this :) |
flora.s.t 3/10/11 . chapter 1hey great chap! you should definitely continue it! |
VaderladyL 10/28/10 . chapter 1I like that you have a lot of good ideas for writing and your stories are good. By the way, I hope that you are not implying that Carlos is from mexican origins because he is not. He is Cuban. |
It'sMyFavoriteSong 10/27/10 . chapter 1Love it, as usual. You did have a few grammar mistakes though, but no biggie, nothing that can't be fixed :) Alright, can I give you some advice? You don't have a lot of stuff between the dialogue. Now, I do the same thing, and I beat myself up for it. You should try and describe whats going on, the setting, etc... it'll make your writing 10x better. |
Beth - Geek Chick 10/27/10 . chapter 1Ooh, you've got me hooked on this one. story alert time. You've captured all the characters very well. Can't wait for an update. :) |
dehulsizer 10/26/10 . chapter 1Thanks for another story. I was hoping you would start another story soon. |