I just finished this book for the second time the other, and i was contemplating writing something for it, it's one of my favorite books. I was unsure of how to portray Mark and Ben's relationship, without making it seem? shallow i guess? or purely romantic? and you've done a perfect job, seriously. I teared up. thank you so much you're really talented

I realized I didn't review the first chapter. Opps.

This was an extension on prologue. I thought the same thing the first time I read this. I loved the detail, the characterization, and everything about it.

That part of the book caught my attention too. It's so nice to read something about it. :) Oh, and I love your writing style Great job!

Nice work! I'm glad to see something with this pairing. That "Do you love me?" line got me the very first time I read the book, and I've liked the pairing ever since :)

This was really great. I love your writing style.

I was pleasantly surprised to see this fanfiction here, not much 'Salem's Lot anywhere...especially with this pairing. I hope you continue someday...? Maybe?

Hey, that was great. Salems Lot really doesn't get enough fanfiction. Thanks for the great read! Keep writing.

Very nice. Well written.

*claps approvingly*

This was good! You're making me want to re-read 'Salem's Lot so that I have more context for this and can actually understand exactly what's going on...I've read every single one of King's published fiction books except for Lisey's Story (own it but haven't finished it) and the DT series (read the first two, have the 3rd, will get through it eventually but I'm more into the horror than the fantasy/western thing.) I don't actually own the 'Salem's Lot book anymore...a lot of my SK books seem to have been lost in my various moves and I've been working on buying them again to rebuild my collection. Have you read The Long Walk? That's my favorite book of all time. Not just of SK's but of all time and forever and ever.

Very nice. It looks a lot better now...though I'm still thinking, 'rape!' at that one line. I must confess, I giggled when I read it-I tried valiantly to resist, but did it anyway. But great job, overall.