This was a pleasure to read. I have to admit, I had to get used to your lack of quotation marks; Though I did so fairly quickly. Chapter 3 is my favorite! I thought it was very cute and nicely done. I wish there were more Storm(Ororo)/Wolverine(Logan) stories out there -- that were MORE than just one-shots. Good job! :)

Very nice, I enjoyed reading this a lot!!

awesome

That was CUTE!

Very well done.
Descriptions really bring the story to life and make the characters seem that much more real. Hope to see more suce exceptional work soon.

Great story. I love this blooming relationship!

Another good story. Aw...:)

What a cool story I liked it! I loved the conversation Ororo and Logan had. What a freaking cool ending too. Do another *Quickly*

great story. another nice and fluffy feeling! Love it, write more!

that was good

I like give me more.

very good, create a sequel!

very good, create a sequel!

great

OMG! This was incredible!! I loved this!
You're definitely on the list of favorite authors!