I love fics about the working stiffs of the Star Wars Universe. Go Working Stiffs! More, please. Perhaps you could have a more expanded plot next time, in a setting of your own creation. Really try to give your fics your own unique style and flavor, and you will build up your fanbase. Keep up the good work!

Well, I think you should continue it, but do a Grammar check next time. But other than that, this was pretty good.

That was pretty good - yeah, write more!

Very good Candie! Yes, of course you should write more! Write tons of chapters so nobody has time to read the awful fic I posted the other day! grins no seriously this was very well done. good job! ;-)

Really enjoyed it! Sequel?

I think you should definantly write more. I really enjoyed it!