Awwwww! Hot with a bittersweet ending.

I think I just discribed sex...

Whatever.

Wonderful.

Write more S/C/D?

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Now that was a hot read. Great writing.

I enjoyed this story very much thank you for writing it :3 good pairs btw

Drowls :/

Don't know the characters or the Genre but I do know your writing. Loved the smex.

D/2

Love it! Totally worth waiting for. Though the “like a slug would on a rock” bit caught me off guard. It was funny and gross at the same time. Hmm… Maybe I’ve just stepped on a few to many slugs barefoot.

Can’t wait to see what you write next.

actually ok for a threesome.

Deeks snorting cream filling...damn that was funny. the rest was pretty hot...ending a tad gross but I could totally see them bursting in like that.

Oh...my...*swallows*...I may need to go take a nice COLD shower...good lord that was hot. I would not complain if you extended this thing even more...or made another scene with these three...lovely images.

OMG that was good. I really wouldn't mind the threesome thing...that sounds...pretty hot actually...Especially with Deeks as the bottom under those two...oh man...now I'm drooling.

*screams* THREESOME! *blushes*

Sorry, but I'm a really big Deeks fan, and there's a disappointingly lack of him in many fics. This is icing on the cake! Do go on!

no threesome but deeks definitely needs to die at the very least get a talking to.

awesome! threesome would be cool

1)Very hot! I would love to see a threesome between Sam, Callen and Deeks.

absolutly yes. threesome is a great idea.