Yeah, problem; Karis CAN'T use Mind Read, that's the one ability that she didn't inherit from her father.

Hello Cyberchao X

I read this thing, AND I SO SUPPORT YOU! I LOVE DAWNSHIPPING! I can't wait for it to be finished.

The second chapter's funny. I like the battle plan idea a lot.

Keep up with the work! I can't wait to see what comes next!

well, i just beat Dark dawn yesterday and karis can't use mind read, yet syveta can use spirit sense which is like mind read only cooler

and the fact that

(i am really rabid at this)(muddshipping all the way)

jenna is matt's mom :(

i think piers is amiti's dad and that

i like the dawn shipping concept

btw never piss mia off (she gets nasty when you do *shudders*)

oh and please look at my stories when you get the time.

thank you later!

A good addition to the sto- *Reads latter part of chapter* O.e I agree with Tyrell. The fuck is going on here? A plot device? And an interesting one at that? This isn't going to end well for someone.

Keep up the good work!

GreatAether96

Wellwellwell, what have we here? Karis & Matthew seem to be a nice pairing.

Even though I hate to say this, Karis seems to be a little... How can I put it... Intrusive.

Tyrell's personality is spot on.

Also, and I hate to say this, Matthew seems a bit... Talkative.

Nonetheless, this story is making a nice unfolding. Keep up the excellent work.

...xD I'm mentally squealing right now. I love how casually their teenage minds are played out (and the Windshipping callout is 3). Great job on the story. Willing to see more of what's going to happen between the two.

Also, Dawnshipping :D

- Fatal Exodus, a.k.a. the Original Dawnshipper

Jeez dude, calm down! The game's not even out yet! Lol.

I've been replaying the first two since it's been about 6 years and I barely remember anything. :/

But yah I'll read this once the game actually comes out. ;p