Hello, I was wondering if you were having the same troubles a lot of authors were with , about posting or adding to your new chapters. If so, if their were any other sites we could find your works on, and if not I'm sorry for mentioning it.

I'm a huge fan of this "Verse" and can't wait for more.

Interesting ending, although I wonder if this means you'll be integrating the Current Titan's line-up from the comics with your active cast making this story cannon or if it's not mentioned again?That's something to ponder while waiting for what's to come next.

...nothing like some V.C Andrew themes to add just a touch more "creepy issues" to Noel's stable

...it was very difficult not to try and stab the laptop screen at the mere mention of Twilight. Huzzah for villain Sues!

Im gonna second sloths opinion on his reaction to Miho o.o Interesting start

This didn't seem to have your usual charm to it, all in all. A fun read, with some good moments, but... seemed a little rushed, methinks.

Well, at least Sophie got an epic moment.

As much as I like the idea of the Titans fighting literal Mary Sues... the mechanics of the writing here just feels rushed. I know you had a deadline for this but it's not up to your usual writing standards.

Enh, this was a fun read. I kind of miss things with an actual plot, but it made me smile. I do wish I'd gotten more Noel/Raven, as you mentioned, but considering the randomness of the whole thing they probably got the best of the deal staying unconcious.

Adam, Ryce, Noel, Raven... hell, all of them. Everyone tends to suffer mind-breaking things on a daily basis in your worlds, don't they? The fact that they can handle it, and the way you write it, impresses me.

Well... Yeah, a certain friend of mine might be unhappy that Noel and/or Raven didn't get any lines. Meh, she can deal with it. It may not be your best work, but it is certainly an entertaining read.

Now for the criticism:

Some parts are not split up enough. As in, there are blocks of text that are a bit too large. Still, a very good story, and I particularly enjoyed the review/podcast/voicecast/shoutcast/vidcast thingy that you had Sophie doing of your Boogeymen works and yourself.

Not your best, but still fun.

...This had NOTHING to do with halloween though XD

I feel like Fracture: surprise me! So far this seems oddly safe.

This... was somewhat mind-fucking at first, but I think I got it. An actual Mary Sue for the villain- interesting.

so the badguy in this boodeymen is a villen sue?

thats.

thats...

huh.

thats not such a bad idea actually.

so the monster in this hallween fic is the avatar of bad fanfiction everywere?

well that is scary. on a very meta level

im not scared that the monsters are going to kill the heros. im scared that the monsters are going to kill the whole damn story. making it utterly unreadable.

normally your 4th wall stuff just pisses me off. but this is quite good

Well, I liked her line at the end XD

Quote? Prolly.