I love it, I can't wait for more. Maybe Tim will go to La team

Man did you ever hit that on the head about the teams attitude towards McGee and Abby! I think that Gibbs needs to realize that Abby is not this perfect little princess everyone makes her out to be. When she really is a manipulative spoiled brat. Not that i dislike her character, just telling it like it is.

I do hope that Gibbs will at least apologize if nothing else Tim deserves that.

I would bet anything McGee is somehome in management. LOL :)

wow, I seriously never noticed the way the team treated McGee. Great insight, great story!

:( I don't like these chapters. I'm glad that it finally shook them up but you had to hurt Gibbs too? :( Where did McGee go? :(

Thanks.

Abby exhibited a lot of annoying characteristics in the episode, Cracked. It seems like the writers of the show are softening Gibbs up a bit because I don't know if Abby would've gotten away with her crap a few seasons back.

I like this story and where it's headed. Your Vance is really believable. Having McGee finally truly stand up for himself is a nice twist. Keep up the good work.

that wad awsome pleeze update

OH NO! Love this story! Can't agree more with you. Time for Gibbs to swallow that pride and get his team back together. Maybe time for a little Abby punishment!

I'm sooo curious about where that might be...not where Gibbs expects him?

Go-go-goooooo Donna! Write-write-write!

(too bad there's no such a little 'hyper' emoticon here to demonstrate my eagerness to read more)

Leon is certainly expressing his anger well, why didn't he step in sooner? Where and what is Tim going to re-assigned at? Who over sees the director?

Nice! Gibbs got the equivilent of a one two punch to the gut and now he's going to make the heads of his team roll. LOL!

To the 'delightful' (and that term is used very very loosly given the foul review!' DeVore504

Your review of our fic was neither constructive or nice in any way shape or form. You have resorted to offensive language and insulting people and should not be reading if you resort to tactics like that.

If you do not like a story then stop reading. Simple as that. DO NOT do what you have done with your UN-CONSTRUCTIVE review. Flaming isn't big, it's not hard and I think you'll find that she wasn't helping Gibbs in the case at all. May I suggest that you go and watch ALL the episodes that have been made reference too. I think you'll find that your argument is pretty much MOOT.

So, thank you very much for your review...(and yes, that statement is dripping with sarcasm, so don't let gratitude go to your head)

Rest assured, you have been reported for your abusive ways.

SHE WAS HELPING GIBBS F U CK FACE

Gotta hand it to Leon, he is definitely handing the blame out just where it should go. Great chapter! Just wish it was longer. You did a great job of showing his disappointment and anger, and of the beginnings of the shame Abby is feeling.

Next chapter soon... I hope.

I am glad Tim was reassigned. I think it shows that the favorite child Abby is not going to be so favorite any more. She really needs to grow up and take responsibility for her actions, had it been any other team member Leon is right they would have been officially repremanded.

Well done

Yeah! And the hammer falls hard on Team Gibbs. Time for the group to pay the pipper. LOL!