This story is so good :)) you haven't updated in almost a year but I hope you continue!

I'm partially interested in how this story is going to end so I'm reviewing in hopes that you will update with the next chapter sometime soon. No pressure though. :)

And why I say 'partially' is because I have read a fanfic concerning a much older Axel and a much younger Roxas being involved with each other. And let's just say that it left me heartbroken and shattered into many thousands of pieces...

Thus, I'm hoping this isn't as tragic but regardless, I'm going to follow through and read this till the end - so I do look forward to the next chapter. :)

Plz update!

Oh my God. This is just so beautifully written. It was like reading a published book, in all honesty.

I loved how you didn't make it ALL romantic, how you made them seem friends at first. But the ending was soooo...realistic yet..I WISHED AXEL STAYED :,( it's sooo sad! See how you made feelings come through your writing? You're a true writer. Wow. Amazing job.

:)SmilinForYa:)

OMG! I love this soooooooooooooooo much please write more!

WOW... just... WOW... I would say more but i'm at a complet loss 4 words at the beautifulness of it, the feeling of mournful tears building behind my eyes, my throat convulsing, and the feeling of shock when u said this happened 2 u. And as many before me had said, "Pleze update!"

This is absolutly beautiful...it makes me feel bad that I'm enjoying such a story that is so real but I can't help it...I love it so much 3 please update soon3

Update plz!

I really like this. It made me want to cry in some parts. Please write more soon.

It's about 1 in the morning and I couldn't leave this without writing a review. This is so realistic and raw, it's almost like a movie. This is written so beautifully. :]

I'm really not sure what to say anymore, I think it's been a while since I read something that actually makes me sit there and think.

I completely commend you for this and I kind of envy your writing style. I can't wait for the next update.

Again, your courage to write this story amazes me. Writing from the opposite point of view is also really awesome. Keep strong and I hope you can continue to write this because, as much as it's a little disturbing and certainly different, it's educational. Hugs.

Jeez, I don't even know what to say... Your writing is just so beautiful, and it was very nice of you to entrust your readers wih something so personal. I really like all of your stories, but I am especially delighted in inquiring how this story ends up.

Thank you,

tsukiyomi 3

Awwww. That is so touching

This is a fantastically written story, and I really can't wait for the next chapter.

The way that Roxas is so naive and innocent, and Axel is so tortured makes it seem very realistic.

You really are a very strong person to be writing about something that will probably be irritating half healed wounds.

I applaud you. Writing about something so personal and traumatic must be difficult for you but then again...it's nice to be able to get things out. Two years isn't very long and I'm sure it's bringing up some old emotions. I hope you're okay and I think you're very brave.

...God I sound like a psychologist.

Anyways, cheesy counciling aside, this is a very good story and I'm going to head on to the next chapter now.