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Bombay91 12/29/05 . chapter 5
this is an awsome chapter and story. update soon. thanx.
Gigicerisier 5/24/03 . chapter 5
Hello, it's me again. I wanted to review more since I haven't said all I wanted in my previous review since it became too long.

Your story becomes more and more exciting! So, Trowa is a kind of position like Yue right?

I wonder who was talking to Trowa when somebody told him to protect her and call him Guardian.

Was it Eriol,Yue or Creation card?

I have reread your story then I noticed this part.

Hiiragizawa had a pitiful look on him. Gathering the panicked boy, he said, “There is nothing you can do right now. What has happened here, I do not know. Perhaps I can explain the very best I can. Then we can find Kinomoto Sakura.”

Why did Eriol say like very distant way caling her such as Kinomoto Sakura even he usually call her very casual way? He even didn't go Tokyo Tower quick enough to help Sakura and Shaoran even though he easily sense any danger usually...

What's wrong with him.

Well never mind, Sakura have got Trowa, Wufei and Duo to fight with the evil Sorcerer card and Seiryu! I also wonder what gonna happen to Heero and Relena. Relena is my fovourite character along with Trowa so I hope she won't hurt too much... I think Relena and Sakura are quite similar since they both fight for peace and willing to scrifice themselves for people.

I don't know understand those who bash Relena like Relena O korosu or something...

I don't like Tomoyo so much thanks to those ET worshipers.(I used to like her since I liked Tomoyo and Sakura yuri pairing.) She is much worse than Relena since she videotaped everything about Sakura, no private at all! but I don't do like bashing her in the story.

Are you planning to write any Trowa and Relena story? I wish you would. I can't believe Clow just forgot about the evil card!

What an irresponsible guy! So, basically worlds of Sakura and Gundam fellows threatened to be destoroyed because of his stupid mistake? Oh.. Poor Sakura and other gudians... (Ok.. including Shaoran even though I don't like him.)

I still confuse about the past of Wufei , is Wufei a kind of sorcerer before Potter reincarnated? So what happened the people being sucked into the Sorcerer card? Are they dead? then why did Quatre become Mediwizard suddenly? Hopefully I could catch up more later chapters.

Well, anyway, I hope you will update soon. Your story was put on my list of favourite stories now.

Keep writing! I really looking forward to reading your new chapters! Bye!
Gigicerisier 5/7/03 . chapter 4
Wow! I love your story. I like the story Sakura goes to another world alone. I hope Sakura will destroy enemy and the card with GW boys without any help of Shaoran or Eriol even though Eriol is my favourite character. because when Eriol comes, usually Tomoyo comes as well! I really don't like it! Wufei became Harry Potter? That's very funny not mentioning to Duo!

I am very glad to have known that Heero is not counterpart of Sakura like usual GW crossovers!

I really really hope Sakura won't be together with Shaoran since too boring then not Heero either I have already read quite a few Heero and Sakura pairings.. I hope Shaoran won't come to get back Sakura. It will be funny that Sakura can't come back Tomoeda any more after fighting with evil card and sorcerer then she end up becomeing new Gundam Pilot or working with Relena in Cinq Kingdam! While working with Gundam boys, she learns about life and grow up as a woman. Otherwise, Sakura and Trowa fall in love each other then she works in circus with him and Catherine. Since Sakura is good at any sports, she becomes a star in their circus! I wish someone wrote Trowa and Sakura cross over pairing story! I think they become very interesting couple than Shaoran and Sakura since Sakura is alike Quatre little bit!

Anyway, I hope you will update soon! I am really looking forward to reading your new chapter! Keep writing!
mei 1/18/03 . chapter 3
nice fic! hope you update soon! is this gonna be ss... i hope it is... anyway, keep up the good work!
tenshiai 1/3/03 . chapter 2
Hello! I'm teh one from axn. Remember me? Well, what was that, that you ordered? *looks at the list of orders* Oh,yeah! A suggestion, right? (or my hadwriting was a heiroglypics that I, myself can't read it _) Ok, so how about making Sakura fall in love with somebody? Or telling that Sakura was a princess and was engaged to a prince. Umm... maybe Wufei would do the trick. Then, Li would get jealous that would eventually lead up Li sacrificing his umm... soul? or body, or may even be both. Then, Voldemort would umm... give in to the chance that he could use Li. Then, umm... torn between two lovers... Wufei and Sakura getting umm... married but Voldemort appears with Li... But when Sakura was saving her umm... not dear anymore or dear in her heart Li, Li will mumble something about he is not really important to her, why is she saving him... Then, Sakura in confusion... then, umm... everything is up to you! _ Hope I helped you a little. Oh, and my pen name here is Ku or so... I'm planning to change it though... _
Insane One 12/13/02 . chapter 1
That was so good. Wonder what happens next. Keep Writing
Darkkrystal 7907 7/17/02 . chapter 2
it very interesting no da it caught my curiousity

and i would like u 2 finish it no da.
Lebeau-Ishida 5/30/02 . chapter 2
It better be continued. You can't just leave 'em all hangin' like that.
Silverdrake 3/7/02 . chapter 1
Keep going, this is great. I what to know what happens next!
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