That was so sweet, and if it had mistakes, they were not noticable enough to take away from the overall story. I started crying near the end. You did a great job. I've played the first two (that have come to the U.S.) and have the third, but just now suddenly wanted to see if there were any good Luke and Layton fics. This one happened to be the first that I read and it was a great one. I love how you showed the relationship and how Layton went and reassured Luke after he solved the puzzle. I think I need a tissue. Well done. 10/10

OMG so cute!

very cute

it made me n'awwww many times :)

Awww I love it. Please write other fanfictions

Wow! That was so cute! I think that this is the kind of thing that you should do a sequal series for. Because I was rather sad when it ended. Could you at least do a longer version? Pleeeeease?

OH MY GOD.

YES.

I'VE BEEN WAITING forever FOR SOMEBODY TO DO THAT PROMPT.

I love you!(platonically)

It's wonderful, just needs some cleaning up and polishing. The idea and intent of the scene is there but it is a bit difficult to read. This would be good for something involving Remi, or even another story surrounding Flora :-)

Awwwwww, I thought that was going to make me die of cuteness. LOVED IT! You shouls write more fanfictions, becuse I will read every one of them.

This is so cute ! I love your story ! I always thought it would be hard for Luke to accept Flora's existence and you described his feelings so well ! Great job :)