i love this story it gets moy beautifull every time i read it you really have a tallent

this was great. really really nice and sweet and even showed eddy's bro in a (slightly) better light. this is amazing. i love it.

I love this story, and Eddy definitely needs more love.

I'm surprised this one has only 3 reviews. It's great! I like how you wrote it in a more realistic fashion, since it really seems Eddy would go through something like this after getting accepted by the cul-de-sac. Although I do think the bit where he theorises that his brother killed the Kankers and hid the bodies was a bit over the top. Other than that, it was fun to read. Good job.

Noo..I didn't want it to end...I was so hooked..great story..faves

Very, Very, Very, Very phenomenal story, dude! You are the only other person that I found out had the potential to explain Eddy's background after the big picture show and reveal a pre-creation that could indicate something great for his future! And you know, I wasn't too into drama fiction as a whole, but after seeing this, I remembered just how important this genre is to characterization. Keep up the good work and I hope to see others like this!

That was very well written. It almost brought a tear to my eye when I saw the ending. Overall, you did a very good job. 9/10.