|Reviews for The Laws of Family|
| TheDoctorsMistress 8/20/11 . chapter 32
Oh my God!
That voicemail was just incredible! I can't believe he'd do that.. well actually I can.. still.. WOW! Does this mean you'll write another sequel..? Or is it just so that you'll have the option to do so? Regardless I loved it -even though it ended with them not being together.. P
| cheshiresapprentice 8/20/11 . chapter 32
OMG OMG OMG THIS STORY IS AWESOME! IS IT MYCROFT WHO LEFT THE MESSAGE?OMG OMG OMG OMG YOU HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL TO THIS PLEASE!
| jeffhardyluvsme 8/20/11 . chapter 32
*wipes away tears* Oh my freaking god! That was okay...but WHY? You seriously CAN NOT leave it like this! Do the prequel but Mycroft? WHY? I undersand you had a reason for writing this the way you did but my heart has broken.
| Nimblestep 8/20/11 . chapter 32
Um, the heck? She just leaves him? After faithfully following all these chapters, the first story also, she just leaves? No. Just no. I'm pretty disappointed in this ending. It was great in the first one, but this? Eh..
| Niklaus.Elijah.Damon.Kol 8/20/11 . chapter 31
This is great, i really want a happily ever after please! I love sherlock and this series has been great.
Keep writing :P
| cuteepiee1 8/20/11 . chapter 31
Oh gosh I love this story so much! Please don't kill Rebecca though! I can't wait for more, update soon please ]
| Juliet's Pen 8/17/11 . chapter 31
Amazing. Simply amazing. I can immediately tell that you have a knack for writing. The flow was good and did not seem overly rushed. The characters are brought to life, there's no other writers that could potray Sherlock as good as you. Your OC is human, she's so realistic. I enjoyed everything, congratulations.
Anyway, two endings eh? Well, it may seem cruel but can you kill Rebecca off? I like her and I hold nothing against her but a happy ending is pretty unrealistic right now, don't you think? Well that's just me. You can do anything you want, it's your story, is it not? ;)
Totally looking forward to your updates. Keep writing!
| mack7180 8/15/11 . chapter 31
1) I love this story so freaking much
2)If you kill her i just might ball my freaking eyees out
3)I dont like to cry. Plz dont kill her
Keep on the amazing work
| C'estMoiLiz 8/15/11 . chapter 14
Lol I winced when I read that.
STUPID NURSE. grrrrrr.
| C'estMoiLiz 8/15/11 . chapter 10
Ohhh silly Rebecca, why even bother asking?
LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Have you got a beta; the grammar could be improved a little, but other than that it's really good.
| C'estMoiLiz 8/15/11 . chapter 9
"I knew there was something different about you"
IF ONLY YOU KNEW.
Okay yes there was fluff but I think justified by the circumstances ;)
| C'estMoiLiz 8/15/11 . chapter 8
That is all.
| C'estMoiLiz 8/15/11 . chapter 7
Aaaannnd weeee'ree BACK.
Yeah Sherlock is definately feeling more Sherlock-y now; glad I'm not the only one picking up on that. Sorry you had to read the criticism again - I had no idea someone had already mentioned it.
Sherlock's reaction to the dog being taken away was the happy medium - the sadness on the inside but the ferocity and coldness on the outside. Love it. :) xx
| C'estMoiLiz 8/15/11 . chapter 6
Imma give some constructive criticism and I hope you don't take offence:
I don't feel Sherlock's being... Sherlock-y enough. Obviously it's been four years, he's grown, he loves Rebecca but I just don't feel he'd react in the same way as you've written.
Maybe it would be better to find a happy medium between tv Sherlock and Sherlock as a normal bloke?
Who knows, I'll probably see the former side come out later in other chapters but this is just what I've noticed.
Other than that, awesome chapter! Love all this drama :) xx
| C'estMoiLiz 8/15/11 . chapter 5
oh you writers you do tease us poor fans. ;)