Oh I so love this story..I bet this is the thirdor forth time I read it...Although I bet if you wrote this other than in the form of a script you could make money...well okay not money but it would be great...

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is that it? that can't be it... no

WE-wait..WHERE'S THE REST?

I know you wrote this story like 3 years ago, but I just read it and it is AWESOME! You should write a sequel!

I love this story! You rule!

OMG! It was awesome! Love it totally! I'm sorry I can't read all the chapters at the moment (it's 1:30 A.M. and I need some sleep) but hopfully, I'll beable to finish reading it all! Keep writing!

Eh, screw signing in! Anyway, my informant says that you can't hotwire a helicopter without causing severe damage to yourself and the bird. Anyway, BRAVO! twas good! And the informant says she likes Mandy and wants Tanya dead. Hehehe! SLINKY!

I love this story :-) I just have to keep going back to read it, it's so cool! Keep writing Jen(n)

Good story Facegirl! I'm Glad Murdock2 Told me to read this!

HAHAHAHAHA! BILLY! Wonderful Facey, wonderful!

Well, in old times, there used to be books in mags, a few chapters at a time. Congrats, Facegirl, you have a book complete!

loved the little lines added. wish it had more, but i liked the line about the utility shed, and how the marshal got them pardoned. continue to write please, and i'll be waiting for your next story.

GEEK! GEEK! GEEK! I love it!(when a plan comes together) ;) Wonderful story. Very funny! Keep writting! Thanks. ;)

Very nice, although I would have done more than tickle! SHe deserved it! ; ) Well, it looks as if we are going to have to come up with a new idea again, hmmm let's see...