I like this. If you ever continue, I'll be keeping an eye out for it. :)

Hotaru's name in the anime was Hotaru. Where did you get Heather from?

Another great chapter.

Another great chapter.

Just a suggestion:

"her Eternal Brooch of the bodice of the gown." should say "her Eternal Brooch on the bodice of the gown."

Great chapter. I could not quit grinning and laughing the whole time I read this chapter. Serena and Serenity are too funny.

Aweasome. Please write more.

I find the plot/premise of this fanfiction very intriguing, although I must admit I find the past forms of the senshi very irritating and would much rather the Scouts set off for the Negaverse on their own - although that would doubtless leave Rini unprotected. Also, I like how you have portrayed Serena; my favorite line so far has to be the one about her "handing Uranus and Neptune their heads in a two-on-one duel for their insubordination" (loosely paraphrased, I think). Although all the temporal paradoxes waiting to happen are making me wince ... Anyways, I enjoyed the fic a lot and psychically urge you to update soon.

more more more i want to know more this is a good storie keep it up the plot is good and it ties in to the anime keep it up

er... do u plan on finishin this?

This story is very intersting. You proberly don't even go to anymore but it would be nice if you continued this story.

UPDATE DAMN YOU! I hate it when i read storys then look at when they were last updated! 09-25-02 come on its been a year!

Are you ever going to update this story!

U should really update this story!

Nice story.

well with screwing up so no one can update I went back and looked at some stories that were posted before I started coming to this site. I'm glad I did this story has to be the best Sailor moon story I've ever read!

-BV

ps. are you going to continue this fic?