Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Search
Reviews for: Captive of Fate
HSK 8/17/02 . chapter 3
cute _... the DISHES ( u know what i mean. i had to say it again)! hey, don't expect intelligent comments from me though...after all, it's 1:30 am...zzzZZzZ
HSK 8/17/02 . chapter 3
cute _... the DISHES ( u know what i mean. i had to say it again)! hey, don't expect intelligent comments from me though...after all, it's 1:30 am...zzzZZzZ
kristy 3/24/02 . chapter 2
*snicker* poor guy...*giggle* it would be sad if you dream about your homework...Suzaku no Monku! bwhahahahahahaha!
Kryssa 3/24/02 . chapter 2
Pretty awesome so far. I'd love to see who the girl turns out to be, and if we have another fight between "monkus" like before. *is shot for bad pun* But this has been really interesting, actually, seeing as how I've wondered what would happen if a guy was sucked in. Keep it up!
J. Liha 3/24/02 . chapter 2
YAY! NEW CHAPPIE! Anyhoo, hmm... is it me or are the twins reincarnations of the Seiryuu twins? _x Heh... anyway, I was thinking you'd make all the seishi women or something but it's all good. _x Poor Masahiro...
Hikari Shisutano 3/24/02 . chapter 2
WAI! I love it! Very cool and original! Please keep writing! _.V
Lanen 3/24/02 . chapter 2
Ehehehehehe... interesting! :) Please continue! :P
Celyia 3/24/02 . chapter 2
Oh, man. That's *way* cute and completely original. I love it!
Kryssa 3/8/02 . chapter 1
So far, this looks like a fun story. Wonder who the twins are... but can't wait for the next chapter!
Kye 3/8/02 . chapter 1
It sounds interesting, Please continue.
sasori 3/7/02 . chapter 1
hehehe...this is amusing...(chuckles some more til she falls off the chair)
el bastardo 3/7/02 . chapter 1
Wai wai! I really like it and hope that you'll keep going with it! I always thought it would be shibby if the miko was a guy
J. Liha 3/7/02 . chapter 1
*whistles* Not bad, not bad at all. So is that Masahiro dude cute? _x I thought of doing this once, but I'm too lazy. But it is original! _x
Return to Top