operation travis: you dumbass. nice

ok ok ok i think the girl kid is demeters kid and not katie

wow I loved this story!

Well, at least now I know how Katie got the burns. And the ending wasn't that bad.

Ok, am I seriously the only one who knows that satyrs are male. The satyrs are male and the nymphs are female. But nobody seems to get it.

Sound Garden! I love Sound Garden! And I like the 'eccentric Demeter' thing, It's very amusing. Great story.

Shiva and Vishnu? Really! So I read the first 17 or 18 chapter back when I didn't have an account and I just found this on my iTouch bookmarks so I read the last few chapters and as sad as it is to have Jo die, I really loved this story.

Whoa, this ended? Since when?

Ah, I see. The third of January. This January. Yes.

Anyway, I haven't reviewed since chapter twelve. So I'll just make up for it with one sort of big review.

Nice story. I actually like how in the ending, the only thing that was resolved was the prophecy. A bunch of good books/fics end that way.

Including this one. XD (That was cheesy, I know.)

The cab driver was a nice touch. That was awesome.

One more thing: The romance actually got a little cheesy in the end, but I always get bored with couples after they get together, so you don't need to take that to heart or anything.

Keep writing. Write whatever, but keep writing.

:)

this was a greate chapter! Your reader-

Katie

Aw, that was great :D May I just say, you have good taste in music!

Amazing ending.

Will you do a follow-up or a sequel?

Good job, and keep writing!

OMG i almost started crying when i saw that the story was over...you did an AMAZING job, especially when you take into account that this is your first story with a plot.

You had no typos throughout the entire story, no flamers, and an average of 3.5 reviews per chapter (including this one). I can't tell you how many times I clicked the favorite story button and it said this story, an unlikely pair, is already on your favorites list.

Amazing story, I can't tell you that enough times. I hope mine does half as well.

Tht was a beautiful ending, no doupt. I honestly hope you continue on with more. Your a great suspense writer. Seriously. I don't flatter people for nothing, you seriously got talent, Pie. Keep that in mind ;D

Nice ending. I liked it. Listen I'm writing a Tratie fic right now and I was wondering if you could give me some advice. If you can the PM me. If not, that's okay.

*Cheers* I love some good sap. ;) I'm so sad it's over. You have one of the best Tratie chapter fics ever. You inspired my Tratie fic. :)