please update soon it is good

This is really good and I think yoiu should definetly write a sequel. It could have something to do with Lily's seer powers getting out of control and her having to find a way to control them so that she doesn't hurt anybody or become a threat to the wellbeing of the world or something. I know, not a very good idea, but you should definetly write a sequel.

but you can't lose what you've never had!

oh, and by the way, I love this story!

man.. cant you write the sequel? your gonna be better since who can captere your way of writing :D

Great story! extremely entertaining!
Jaliy!~

Ah! So cute! I like fluff!

i liked the story though it didnt think it was as good as your other works i thought it was rushed in places, and the ending was very rushed i thought you could of made it better and when lily's parents died i thought maybe some more emotion? she seemed to cry like twice and thats it and then she was fine, but apart from that it was good!

This is a good story! I suggest you try to make Lily less tempermental.

SIL

*gasp* That's the end!?!? NO! You should write more! It's so great! And how come I didnt know that it was ending? Well, that's probably my fault, I never read A/N's *laughs nervously* Anyways, I'll definately read your other story. You are a great writter. This story was awesome. I really think you should write more =D

Oodles of Toodles
Karen

was that the end then?

Fast and short though it does remind me of you r other story with the feet thing. "I-" jab "-think-" jab "-that-" jab -"you got-" jab "- a little-" jab "-obseesed-" jab "-with all the-" jab "-jabbing.HA" Done.

Sarcastic, a little longer but short still adn FAST.

FAST AND SHORT

SHORT

omg! sorry, for chapter 23, i accidentally put update soon, instead of please write a sequel. sorry!