Ah, you're lucky. I still have two weeks to go. It's like torture in Math. All I do is stare up at the clock. imagining the beach. I'm not sure if I pick up any of the info, but I must be since I don't have and F. Anyway, I liked this chapter. Very good description. Just remember these are young kids being forced to fight to death, and even though the Flock has had a brief overview of what they've had to deal with in their life, you can really get an emotional setting with their different stories. That's just an idea, though!

Hey thid is amazing please bring magnus in later. X

Where's Nudge! Oh yeah, for the story, amazingly good. This chapter was mostly dialouge, and I know I always do that, and end up getting so into it that I forget to add details. Details are gold! Don't be afraid to get rich!

Please update a's soon a's absolutely possible!

Hey guys,Kota here!

I shold be updating this week/weekend, I've been really busy!

I've also fixed the first three chapters, so now they are much less confusing. :)

Anyways, keep reading! I promise I read each review and consider all ideas! Thanks everyone!

Omg! PLEASE WRITE MOREEE i really enjoy this story... If i had to say anything though, it woukd probably be that there should be more romance between clary and jace (3) and maybe some jealousy towards max fro. Claty.. Cuz jace is kinna flirting with her o.O

ANYWAAYS please continue it :D

AWESOME STORY! PLEASE UPDATE!

PLEASE UPDATE! i think its really cool the way you put them all into the future! ITS A REALLY GOOD STORY!

Okay, you can kill anyone but Jace,Clary, and Max.I don't really care about the others!

And good story by the way! It's my three favorite books, in one fanfiction!

Okay, you can kill anyone but Jace,Clary, and Max.I don't really care about the others!

And good story by the way! It's my three favorite books, in one fanfiction!

ummmm prim is Katniss's sister not Rue but besides that awesome work

sorry i sent the reveiw without finnishing it ;P this is the continuation.

so, yeah, that'll make it easier to read. i dont mean to be picky, its just what i think.

great story though! update soon!

xxx max in training

hiya! awesome story! i love it, both the concept and the actual story...yaya for you combining 3 of my favourite books ]

the only issue i have is that the layout makes it hard to read. like, reeeeally hard to read o_O

for the layout, you go to a new line everytime a new character speaks and you start a new paragraph when you swich topics. for example:

"Oh, I forgot to mention that we all have special powers too," I said with a cocky smile. "One of Gazzy's happens to be mimicking. The rest of our powers will be revealed in time. Shall we continue walking?" I asked, changing the subject. Everyone nodded, and Isabelle cast one last look at Gazzy. The silence didn't last very long. Magnus suddenly felt the urge to ask Gazzy a question.

"Could you sing an entire song for us? I could use some music…"

"Sure!" Gazzy cried immediately. He looked thoughtful for a moment, then... "Oh baby baby, how was I supposed to know? Hit me baby one more time!"

This got a laugh out of everyone. Even out of Fang and Alec, who were quite a bit alike. As Magnus turned back to the road, he stopped short.

"Ah, I see we have finally found civilization. Unfortunately, if this is the future, it is not as bright as everyone thinks it will be."

We all turned to the direction Magnus was facing.

"Oh God," Isabelle whispered.

The town standing before us was in shambles and looked virtually deserted. Without an actual verbal command, we all took off towards the town. When we reached it, we could tell that it wasn't deserted. We looked around in amazement.

The town was way beyond run down, and the people looked like walking skeletons. As we ran into the town center, we got strange looks. People started murmuring and crowding around us. I managed to catch some phrases:

"Who are they?"

"Where did they come from?"

"Will they stay here?"

"Will they be eligible for the hunger games?"

Hunger games? What was that? Then, appearing from the crowd surrounding us, a very important man stepped out.

"Hello strangers," he said. "Welcome to district 12. Follow me, I have some questions for you."

I LOVE dis story! I wanna keep reading it! But I also have a bit of advice: I would be much easier to read if you divided it into paragraphs. :\

Love it! more,more,more!