So, Ramza's the reincarnation of A: Ranma Saotome, B: Son Goku or C: Shirahama Kenichi. Or something like that. Whatever, the idea of a tree-felling, house-destroying super-martial artist Ramza is probably one of the funniest incarnations of his character I've seen thus far.

Delita's Teta Senses are tingling!

Ah, Argath. Thou arth screwed. Death by Overprotective Brother no less...

Who knew making Ramza a broken character so early on had such consequences?

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Cheers.

-Tantei1412

Funny and nicely done. Hope to see more on this later!

lol, plz continue this, XD its soooo amusing.

Lolwin. Someone's been powerleveling Ramza. If Ramza took some side-training as a Knight, he'd be able to shatter swords with his fists. Oh, and armour and stuff (without killing the person inside). Might be useful for disabling people. Then again, when you can just drop a building on them and then revive them later, this all becomes rather useless.

On another topic, it's nice to see a story where Argath isn't a 2D psycopath. I mean, sure I hate him in-game, but I'm sorta happy that finally someone's taken advantage of fanfics being fanfics, and is actually developing him into a slightly likeable character.

Story of win,

HR

Argath? That's the same as Algus, right?

Ahh... now this is intruiging, what will happen when Delita catches up with Argath? Really looking forward to your next chapter.

Eheheheeee... now the entire company is developing monk phobea! Though.. considering the ending of the chapter will the company be voting to keep Ramza on the sidelines more?

ahahaa... the phobea Argath is developing of Ramza should do well in diverting him from killing Delita's sister. Very fun fic!

Ahhh When I see Godhand, I think of a Naruto fic where Godhand is the name of Tsunade's super strength technique, I cannot help but think of Ramza with super mountain crushing strength. Looking forward to your fic.

This is a fun exploration of the game!

Noticed that you put in a bunch of stuff from the PSP version, and I like that a lot - it's pretty rare that stories in this section depart from the PS1 version, it seems. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more. :D

I really hope that this Argath turns out not to be a b st rd. Hilarious so far!

You had me at Godhand. Wonderful stuff.

It was... a rather interesting turn of events. After all, throughout the game, I kept seeing Agrath as that snobbish noble who only went along with things because his role-model was there. Having Tietra become an interest to him was definitely new, and hopefully that atittude of his will go because of it.

Probably anyway.

I hope the next chapter remains as interesting to read.