Wow. This is a fantastic story, I'm really loving the sister angle on this. I hope you update soon.

This story is really awesome. You've obviously thought it out and know where you're going. I love all of your character interaction, it makes me feel like they're real people doing real things. It's all very good. I see it's been *ahem* years, but I hope to read more at some point in the future. Good luck!

so you haven't updated in a while... but you have to. this story is awesome, it's not ELF, and there's so little seaQuest fanfiction that I can really get into. Please? pretty please?

Great story! I love how Tim reacted during the interview and I can really picture him walking away like he did. You should definately write more soon. It'd be nice if he could replace Kimura with Randy. :)

cool story

very very cool - will there be a part three coming soon?

Another story where I end up with a big goofy grin on my face...
Even though I don't particularly like the third season (to the point of refusing to have anything to do with it), I think this is a wonderful start to a story.

I really liked it! Thanx for writing it!

I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and kept in character pretty well. I liked the way you covered a couple of characters with reasonable depth at the same time.

Well. That was pretty good. I liked the Tim parts. I appreciate the fact that everything is spelled correctly and there are no major errors. It almost makes me forget that Lucas has no sister - almost, but not quite. I'm not exactly sure what kind of story they are suppose to be writing, if everything is classified, but I may just be dense. I'm not sure about Randy and Doug sharing a room. All in all, a nice story. Be careful that Randy doesn't fall into the perfect Mary Sue role.

this is a wonderful story

OK, now write the ending please.

Beautiful story, and what a unique idea! I'd love to see more very soon.

I like it! But I thought you expressed Lucas' and Miranda's feelings very well, though!