Please update, I miss this fic...

You may be a less than consistent updater but you are definitely a fantastic writer. Not just your language but your flow and character analysis and use of humor. Thank you for sharing and I hope you keep writing and updating :)
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woah i miss asucaga so much! and this one really brought me back! i like your story, there's something happen between kira and cagalli back then? why the reason Yamato's prevent cagalli meet kira? ookay..i should not asking yet or its gonna be ruin the story after all...i love it! asucaga there with their moment

I'm glad you updated this even after so long because it's a very well written and thought out story. The budding romance between Athrun and Cagalli is very well executed (and super cute, I love their bickering), and the Kira and Cagalli sibling scenes are adorable, especially Kira getting jealous of Athrun. I love how feisty you've made Cagalli; really getting back to her attitude during the first war.

Really hope you keep updating this! I'm looking forward to more of your writing. Hope to see more YzakxShiho as well. :3

This is seriously adorable. I loved how you portrayed all the characters (though, I'm still vague about Fllay). I forgot to ask, but how old are they all? I'm guessing in there mid-twenties, since the have jobs and finished college, exactly... what age again? Anyway, I can't wait for your next update!

-Twinklefeather

I love your story so much! It's so light...Athrun is so funny here...hehe...Hope you won't delay on the update!

so far you did a good job! i really like your story and i hope you won't take long to update it XD please update soon!

Nicely done as always, obviously. But maybe this is starting to turnout lighter than I had hoped from the first three chapters. It's probably just me, but I'm kinda missing that KiraCagalli build up. That particular feeling where Cagalli's the girl whom were unfamiliar to all of them. Was also kinda hoping that Kira and Lacus would experience a bit more strain(a test) in there relationship(and not just because of wedding plans). But beh, your story.

Looking forward to see how the rest of the story unfolds.

Not your fault, but just wanted to let you know that there are some sentences here on the chapter that has been bunched up together.

And what? And when have Cagalli ever been bustier than Flay? (face palm). YzakShiho? (face palm again) should have know Yzak could never fly solo.

Overall, good chapter.

Athrun and Cagalli is so cute and I'm also loving the Dearka Miriallia.

I wasn't really expecting to see Flay's name in here and as the problematic character too, but I guess that's to be expected and quite all right. I just hope she isn't mindlessly evil. That would ruin the whole story for me because I really like her.

Again, great chapter.

So far so good, I'm really enjoying the story. Hurray, something to read! You're an awesome writer from the look of it. The way everything is constructed is amazing. The mood, the environment, and the characters are all very well done. I so loving the flow right now, loving the slow plot build-up and how it doesn't suddenly just rush into romance. Heck, Athrun seems to be more concern about Kira, his best-friend's condition before Cagalli which is how it should be!

I'm hoping to see more update soon.

Great chapter! Well-written and entertaining as usual :)

I really like how you characterized Dearka/Miriallia's relationship dynamic. It's quite funny how Dearka is rubbing off on Miriallia. It makes the Miriallia and Cagalli interaction a lot more fun too.

And Athrun was adorably dorky in this chapter. Glad to see that his and Cagalli's relationship has progressed so far, (they've kissed already!) though I wonder what Kira will say about it.

I'm quite curious to see where this fanfiction is headed, and whether you'll expand more on Cagalli's past and Cagalli and Kira's weird twin connection. I look forward to future updates!

Enjoyable _ i really love the plotting so far and how Cagalli has meant Kira. :D

The only words I can give you are as such: no mistakes awesome, oh and... UPDATE! when you can of course.

WritingKnightmare

Ahhhhhhhhh, oh my gosh, the part where Athrun smugly denied that he was not staring at Cagalli was so epic. I'm sooooo liking this story. Oh please please pleaseupdatesoon.