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| Reviews for Forgotten Lightning |
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   Bookdancer 2/22/12 . chapter 5Great job so far, but longer chapters would be preferable. Of course, there are some pretty big paragraphs, and probably at least a thousand words, but ya know... readers are never really satisfied. They always want more. But if you could try to update a bit faster than you have been, that would be great. Update soon! |
| SeaChick 4/22/11 . chapter 1 Definate point of view problems. You constantly switch from first person Percy to first person Annabeth to third person. Try to keep it all from one point of view |
| Rachel E Dare 1/15/11 . chapter 1 Whos POV is this? |
| SaradocCraver101 12/29/10 . chapter 4 I love it and please update as soon as you can. _ |
| Scouti 11/24/10 . chapter 3 awsumm update soon! |
| greek . mythology . lover 11/24/10 . chapter 3 oh..that was a good story.. can't wait for the other chapters.. i wanna see how their love can withstand this... oh.. and i think that it's so cute that even though he doesn't remember her he still loves her..! XDDD |
| Percian-Perci 11/22/10 . chapter 2 O-MY-GODS! That was amazing update sooon |
