Well done. I like the distinctly creepy feel, and the fact that after the last line I could almost hear Yami no Malik's dark laughter.

Well this was quite a unique piece, certainly the first Halloweenfic to have no direct speaking involved but the best thing about this piece is that you've written it in such a clever way that they speak through their movements and reactions. It's an extremely hard maneuver to pull off but I think you do it very well.

My only piece of criticism is that the beginning tenses are slightly confusing; it was slightly off-putting reading present tense but maybe that's my bias.

Repetition of these words sum up the whole thing; "The fear may remain. The shock may remain. The silence may remain."

Truly lovely and well done on such an interesting piece

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