 Whisp 2/9/05 . chapter 2Very interesting premise. I felt the end of chapter 2 was a bit rushed though. I know the Death Eaters would probably be on the suspicious side, but I doubt they would jump to conclusions that quickly, especially considering that Oliver just won them a victory that same night.
I like the idea of Oliver as a spy though. And I like the idea of Draco being a spy even more. It would be interesting to find out who else has level five clearance. Although, judging from the last update date, I doubt I'll get to find out anytime soon. It would be wonderful if you would update.
Amy |